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Sorrow & Blood

Sorrow and pain is what we feel

The temptation and sensation for someone to kill

Circulating through our bodies is boiling blood

And when we get angry, it wants to flood

What happened to the beautiful and gorgeous thing we call love?

A gift we recieved from the Gods up above

We recived and used it,

We tainted and abused it

We recieved another gift, so easy to tell

MADNESS!!! straight from the fiery pits of hell

Then comes SORROW

a leader, something to follow

Then comes BLOOD

with the death as it floods

We have blood; We have sorrow

It can flood; We can follow

It is a continous chain

The follow, the flood

As we continue on: SORROW & BLOOD.

 


i just tried to make it rhyme! its not that good, so dont get over excited But plz leave comments!!!!!

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I LOVE IT!!!*pop*

2008-08-09 20:27:38


***** rating... very good

2008-07-07 06:26:42


wow this is good

2008-05-21 14:16:33


now....that was good...

2008-05-20 15:34:53


pretty good.

2008-03-08 15:40:39


thx so much!!!! believe it or not, i wrote this when i was mad at someone(not giving out any names)

2008-03-07 13:30:50


wow O.o thats REALLY good O.O

2008-03-06 21:59:50


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