BAM! My head made a loud noise as it hit the ceiling of the van (which was not an easy feat considering how short I was). "Well good Morin' sleepy head!" My father's unusually cheerful voice called to me, "How did ya sleep?" "Not so well Dad, I think I had a nightmare." I said in sleepy voice. "Great kid, just great!" he said totally not paying attention to my answer." It’s only ten more minutes until we get to the new house, so get all of your food wrappers out of the back and prepare to be amazed!” While I had been asleep (a lot of things seem to happen when I’m asleep), the surrounding landscape had expanded into thousands of trees (too many for me to count) in so many different colors that it made my eyes hurt. A sign on the side of the road read: EDEN CITY LIMTS... great, new town, same problems.
I've had this on my computer for like three weeks! Please tell me what you think!



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ARRGGHH!!!! WHEN WILL AARIC ENTER??????
BOLOHATSDANNE
2007-12-25 18:32:48
kool but is it about vampires?? cuz i would love more of it*pop*
ESONO
2007-12-18 20:20:31