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Smile

so long ive tried

2 make u love me

but now i make u smile

 

i dnt no if

thats btr or wrs

so i mite take awile

 

if u love me

then y did u

suddenly start 2 ignor

 

ur friends stare at me

and ignor u

welcom 2 MY world

 

it seems like evrythin

is based of me

when i hear them speak

 

the most important

wont say a word

u just turn the other cheek

 

then we talk

alone again

just me and you

 

we smile and laugh

we lean so close

and you stare into my eyes

 


i hope it happens

our lips will touch

and passion will grow from hate

 

tell me this, though,

y was it that

they new; u ignore

 

can't it b

the way it was

when we were so young

 

i just miss u

and i need you

so be the you i new

 

dont hate me

just 'cause they do

i no you really dont

 

and stop saying

what you really dont mean

it hurts more than just one...

 

 

JUST SAYING...                                                                                            


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It's good to me. Besides, your a better poet then I M.

LOVEMAN


2008-09-14 21:49:46


twilightstar, what do u mean "mn." thank u loveman. but quit loving my poetry. its not that good and i dont deserve it.

ALWAYSLOVEHIM2


2008-07-27 23:21:21


Luv it. *pop*

LOVEMAN


2008-06-12 18:12:57


mn.

TWILIGHTSTAR12


2008-05-31 10:18:24


WOW.... this ended up being longer than i thought it would be...

ALWAYSLOVEHIM2


2008-05-31 05:11:12


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