“It was pretty easy to tell what happened.” Said the coroner. “Victim’s Zachary James Aquarius. Brown hair, male, blue eyes, about 14 to 15, 5feet 6inches. Mother identified him. C.O.D was drowning. Abrasions on wrists and ankles shaped like chain links probably used to weigh him down. Found by a couple that went for a late night skin dip. Women’s leg brushed against something saw the body and called it in. T.O.D about 5:34 P.M.”
“Life cut short before his time.” Said a man.
“Wired thing was his lungs, stomach, and all other openings were filled with water. including his nasal cavities and ear canal.” Replied the coroner.
That was the last Zack heard before he could move. The men left the room. What happened? He thought. Then he saw a dark blue glow where his heart was. Then a little man appeared. “Greetings elemental warrior of water. I am your orb guide here to tell you of your destiny.”
“ elemental…. Warrior?” questioned Zack.
“ Long ago magic ran through every thing. But man could not handle magic in its world. So it left but to insure forces didn’t meddle the elemental lord divvied his power in to several orbs that allowed a human to control that element.” The man made a hand movement and from Zack’s heart came an orb the size of both of his fists.
“That thing is in side me?!”
“Yes. You are the elemental warrior of water you must use your power to find your 4 other companions and make sure magic bad or good doesn’t try to drastically change the world.” Then Zack said some thing he didn’t understand why.
“Why. I got the power. I make the rules! And first I’m going to get my revenge!”
“Wait you cant! You mustn’t !”
“away with you!!!” the man disappeared. Zack found his close and got dressed. Then he went to Biff’s house.
He grabbed 2 gallons of water from his refrigerator and went up to Biff's room. “Hey Biiiffffff.” He whispered. Biff slowly opened his eyes. “Boo.” Biff was about to scream but Zack made water come from one jug and go over his mouth and bind his arms and legs. “shhhhhhh. You don’t want them to be awake when they die. You left me without a family and now I’m going to do the same to you.” Zack dragged Biff to his parents’ room. He made 2 water spikes and thrust them into Biff’s parents’ heads. Biffs screams were muffled by his gag. A baby started to cry. Zack went into the room there was a baby and 2 twin girls. Zack made a water hand and crushed the baby’s skull. Please stop it’s not what I want! then the girls awoke.
“b.. brother?” said one. Then Zack made another water hand and used both to twist their heads off. Blood spurted everywhere. “ now its your turn.” The gag was removed and so were the bounds. “you son of a bitch!!” Biff yelled. He tried to punch Zack but Zack blocked it with water and sapped Biff’s arm. Biff cried out. “yes! Let me here you scream!” he made water daggers around his hands and raised one. He was about to strike when he stopped abruptly. He screamed and his hands went to his head. A black gas came out of his mouth. He sliced it with one of the dagger. The orb guide reappeared. “it appears your heart was filled with repressed darkness. This had to happen to prevent you from turning to evil. Here take these and find the others” 4 small marbles appeared in Zack’s hand. “ they will glow when an elemental is near look to the west.” The sprit disappeared. Zack turned to biff, he was stricken with fear. “I'm sorry. I know that doesn’t bring them all back but don’t let them die in vain take the opportunity to turn you life around and prevent people from having to experience events like this.” Then Zack turned into water and went out the window.
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.....i cant believe you killed the baby.....and the twins!! how cruel! anyways i loved itt!! on to the next^.^
VASHLOVER6
2007-09-15 15:52:05
A little bit graphic, but I'm not trying to complain. Keep up the good work.
DARKWATER
2007-06-30 18:57:39
woah! coolness :D*pop*
GAARASDREAMGIRL
2007-04-27 17:43:37
cool
KINGDOMHEARTSIIX
2007-04-25 18:01:58
omg!!! love it!
ANIMEMANGAVIDEOGAMEGIRL
2007-04-18 17:03:42
ohhh...i cant wait 2 read the next 1..
TENKAL
2007-02-28 08:47:06
good..but im some what confused*pop
SYRANHATAKE
2007-02-05 18:32:22
you killed the baby? Such A dark humor! But - I shouldn't be the one talking... I killed a granny in my story...
LADYDARKNESS
2007-01-30 18:58:38
i think its intersesting plz make more and poor baby :(
YUKITHERAT
2007-01-23 20:27:22
its really good.^_^
INUGIRL93
2007-01-22 16:41:15
um, this one was, um, interesting?
MANGAFAN05
2007-01-22 12:06:07
Awe man, this is EXACTLY the part where the introduction to a good story begins so don't lose it, okay?
CORDER
2007-01-08 16:33:54
WHY THE BABY!!!! YOU KILLED THE BABY!!! NO YOU DIDN' JUST KILLED IT!!! YOU CRUSHED IT'S SKULL!!! OHMIGSOH!!! SURE KILL THE GUY THAT KILLED HIM! EVEN MAKE HIM SUFFER A LITTLE BIT!! BUT DON'T KILL THE INASENT BYSTANDARS!!!! good story though...i'm kinda caught in it....
IMNOTSTOOPID
2007-01-01 18:17:07
LUV IT
LOVEFOUNDER
2006-12-30 11:20:45
oh cripes...just killed'em all didnt he?..even the babiesT.T....but it makes for an interseting story...i like it...cant wait for the next chapter(or part)
NAFYLA
2006-12-29 16:50:30