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Trembling body with fear and the touch of the hated, Blood so sweet, yet so crossly tainted, With the sorrow of the demons who fallen without passion, With their broken wings, they come down crashing, They tormented me so sweetly with every chance, Forced slowly into a sweet decadence, Sleeping soundly I hear their screeches, Sucking out my mind like blood-thirsty leeches, They cut me deeply to bring back my menacing pain, I taste my darkened soul and bite down with vain, My love has vanished out of my dethroned heart, As the demons continue to discreetly tear me apart, Wanting you to save me from my suffering, But I can’t seem to reach you through this deafening rain, Your too far away, yet I can still hear your faint heart still beating within you, Beating loudly within my head like bullets to the air I lose, Falling silently into the Awaken, I can feel hands on my shoulders and im being shaken, The light burst from all directions into my thoughts, But then I find myself falling once again and not being caught, Hitting the ground, buried, broken, dead, Falling helplessly into another Endless slumber yet.
can i help you?
it;s good hope I could read more of ur poems
Most of my new poems are like this. Deep, dark, tormented. Hope yall like it^^