If your father could see you now he would be proud of you I'm certain this is really touching but there is no need to hate your father because he may have left Earth but he will always be in your heart and mind so he'll never leave you ^_^ *pop*

MANGAMANIACNAT

08:45 AM, 09.18.2008

wow i feel u i lost my father almost 8 years ago

OREIRO12

11:32 AM, 04.09.2008

i bet ur father was great man but time r hard and u need to move on

UCHIHAFAN13

07:31 AM, 03.29.2008

oh my gosh. that is really deep. i almost started crying. very beautiful poem. i hope your work gets published someday, its amazing... *sniff*

VAMPIREFREAK

11:40 AM, 02.19.2008

wow dis is really nice... i my kind of compare toward wat u said bout ur father. My grandmother whom took care of me ever since i was lil is very sick n i found out dat wat she has is terminal n i hate having 2 see her like how i see her now... i also wright poetry but hardly share it n when i finally do my teacher keeps it. But i know i've maid great poetry...like 4 instance i wrote dis 4 my dad since my 'rents r divorced,i care and it shows u just chose not to see,he always thought i never cared n dat i never wanted 2 have some quality time w him

SYLLENE

03:31 AM, 01.01.2008

so sad. *sniffles* so good though.

HOMANASHI

02:55 PM, 11.06.2007

wow that is so sad T-T

321SASUKE123

12:32 PM, 10.15.2007

SSooo ddeeeeeeeppp!!!!

KAGAMAROO

06:52 PM, 10.13.2007

thatz soo beautiful!!!

CRAZYPAKI

02:36 PM, 10.13.2007

Wow!! Such a powerful yet sarrowful lyrics.

GEMINI1988

01:17 PM, 10.13.2007

....adam

JENNY767

11:47 AM, 10.13.2007

wow.. that was wonderful.. * sniffles* ... * sobbs* hugs*

TOHRUXYUKIXKYOLOVER

11:44 AM, 10.13.2007

i know how u feel.I have a friend who moved away.It feels like she died because i know she wont be there for me.but i still think of her.And i know i cant find another person like her.So just know u will never forget him.no one will ever replace ur dad. He must have been a great dad.I know u must still miss him,but if u want 2 see him just think hes right next 2 u.U will never find some one 2 replace him.No one will take his place.I promiss.Iam sooooooooooo soooooooooooooooo sorry 4 ur lost braga210.

YUKISOHMA88

10:59 AM, 10.13.2007

that the best thing i ever saw someone write for their father.I'am sorry u lost ur father.I cant imagin what i eould be without my dad.iam so sorry for u (crying).

YUKISOHMA88

10:47 AM, 10.13.2007

that was so beutiful T T

CHEEKYANGELGIRL

08:50 AM, 10.13.2007