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Sad Sad Song

Hey everyone, I want to thank everyone for the lovely comments I have received from my song Father. I thank everyone, thank you, all of you. When I started to write lyrics and poems, I did it for the purpose to help people. For a long time, no one did for me. I was just as lonely and depressed. I hated the world, I hated everyone in it, and I hated myself. I wrote this, on New Year's Day of 2007. I wanted to let out what bothered me. I was jealous, jealous of everyone out there who could smile while I could only frown. I wrote what I felt that nobody would listen to. What I thought, was nothing. But nothing in life is worth nothing. Everyone has a story and no one can say they have had a happy life but for everyone who is here now reading this, smile, because with everything that has happened, you are still here. You are worth more to life than you ever thought possible, and that is why I wrote this song.

Sad Sad Song

This is my story
This is my song
Where I don't fit in
Where I don't belong
I'm stuck in the middle
I'm just stuck in between
I'm holding back
What I want to believe

 

What if I were to
Tell you my sad sad song?
If I write it down on paper
Would you follow along?
What if my words
Were all so wrong?
Would you stay by me
Or would I say so long?

Would you ever feel
The way that I do?
When I want to say more
Than I love you
Would she smile back?
Would she walk out the door?
Would she love me too?
Would my tears stain the floor?

What if I were to
Tell you my sad sad song?
If I write it down on paper
Would you follow along?
What if my words
Were all so wrong?
I think I would
Be better gone

I'm saying farewell
To my unfortunate mistakes
My heart was real
But I was just fake
Now can you listen
To my sad sad song?
Where my heart was right
But I was always wrong

What if I were to
Tell you my sad sad song?
If I write it down on paper
Would you follow along?
Why can't I see
I'm so much more?
But I was in a hurry
To close that door....

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Added 2007-10-13 20:25:18
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That is very deep but I know what you mean in some ways see i have depression and for along time since I was angry at everyone and anyone Now I'm mostly better there are some bad days but I now that I'm loved so thing will be ok after all your mistakes make you stronger right ^_^ *pop*

2008-09-18 08:54:28


thats really good.....and lots of other things that i cant really explain with words.....pop.....

2008-02-19 11:48:54


That's.... wow.... I can't.... wow.... *pop*

2008-02-08 12:08:24


wow... u r amazing! therz nuthing else 2 say.........

2007-12-04 13:48:03


too good for spoken words.

2007-11-23 12:24:38


a sparkle a gleam, in another poets eyes, the laws of poems it sorta defies, A rare story loved and shared by all, can you here this other poets call?

2007-11-01 07:53:08


awwwww...

2007-10-30 17:33:31


that real beautiful

2007-10-26 13:00:33


a song well song in the poets eyes the sprakel of love is in the heart the love is not for a women but the love is for her, the art a love spent well a love spent caring a love wanted by all

2007-10-19 21:15:36


Very well done! Deep.

2007-10-17 14:03:29


deep.............*pop*

2007-10-14 19:57:20


oh wow it made me cry too...... i love it. it's really good.

2007-10-14 16:06:01


made me cry....i LOVE IT.

2007-10-14 14:55:53


i love it.

2007-10-14 12:45:42


i love it.

2007-10-14 12:45:42


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