Hey everyone, I want to thank everyone for the lovely comments I have received from my song Father. I thank everyone, thank you, all of you. When I started to write lyrics and poems, I did it for the purpose to help people. For a long time, no one did for me. I was just as lonely and depressed. I hated the world, I hated everyone in it, and I hated myself. I wrote this, on New Year's Day of 2007. I wanted to let out what bothered me. I was jealous, jealous of everyone out there who could smile while I could only frown. I wrote what I felt that nobody would listen to. What I thought, was nothing. But nothing in life is worth nothing. Everyone has a story and no one can say they have had a happy life but for everyone who is here now reading this, smile, because with everything that has happened, you are still here. You are worth more to life than you ever thought possible, and that is why I wrote this song.
Sad Sad Song
This is my story
This is my song
Where I don't fit in
Where I don't belong
I'm stuck in the middle
I'm just stuck in between
I'm holding back
What I want to believe
What if I were to
Tell you my sad sad song?
If I write it down on paper
Would you follow along?
What if my words
Were all so wrong?
Would you stay by me
Or would I say so long?
Would you ever feel
The way that I do?
When I want to say more
Than I love you
Would she smile back?
Would she walk out the door?
Would she love me too?
Would my tears stain the floor?
What if I were to
Tell you my sad sad song?
If I write it down on paper
Would you follow along?
What if my words
Were all so wrong?
I think I would
Be better gone
I'm saying farewell
To my unfortunate mistakes
My heart was real
But I was just fake
Now can you listen
To my sad sad song?
Where my heart was right
But I was always wrong
What if I were to
Tell you my sad sad song?
If I write it down on paper
Would you follow along?
Why can't I see
I'm so much more?
But I was in a hurry
To close that door....
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That is very deep but I know what you mean in some ways see i have depression and for along time since I was angry at everyone and anyone Now I'm mostly better there are some bad days but I now that I'm loved so thing will be ok after all your mistakes make you stronger right ^_^ *pop*
MANGAMANIACNAT
2008-09-18 08:54:28
thats really good.....and lots of other things that i cant really explain with words.....pop.....
VAMPIREFREAK
2008-02-19 11:48:54
That's.... wow.... I can't.... wow.... *pop*
MANGAREVOLUTIONARY15
2008-02-08 12:08:24
wow... u r amazing! therz nuthing else 2 say.........
CRAZYPAKI
2007-12-04 13:48:03
too good for spoken words.
XXXHOLIC13
2007-11-23 12:24:38
a sparkle a gleam, in another poets eyes, the laws of poems it sorta defies, A rare story loved and shared by all, can you here this other poets call?
KOROMI2
2007-11-01 07:53:08
awwwww...
ILOVENICKB
2007-10-30 17:33:31
that real beautiful
SLIFER
2007-10-26 13:00:33
a song well song in the poets eyes the sprakel of love is in the heart the love is not for a women but the love is for her, the art a love spent well a love spent caring a love wanted by all
WOLFRIDER
2007-10-19 21:15:36
Very well done! Deep.
IZUMIN
2007-10-17 14:03:29
deep.............*pop*
REDCLOUB
2007-10-14 19:57:20
oh wow it made me cry too...... i love it. it's really good.
KITTIN111222333
2007-10-14 16:06:01
made me cry....i LOVE IT.
MOONDRAGON
2007-10-14 14:55:53
i love it.
JENNY767
2007-10-14 12:45:42
i love it.
JENNY767
2007-10-14 12:45:42