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Still needs to be colored/lettered/sound FX....
One step at a time.
By The way, I'm looking for a colorist that is willing to work with back-end pay.
If you are one, or know anyone, please send me a link at: jeongmy723@yahoo.com
-peace-
very nice line work. I really want to know more about the characters and world they are in now. I actually might be able to color for you starting in June. How many pages do you need painted? You can post on my profile to answer.
Very good compared to the rest of the stuff here. But your main problem regarding the art, is that your hair looks sorta lame in some parts. Its oversimplified sometimes. I suggest more texture on the hairs, or accentuate their outlines, making the ends with thinner outlines and thinker as they go towards the head, or visa versa. Or altogether darkening all the outlines. Some of the best mangas are drawn with hella thick lines. Example: hellsing, although has shitty story, has great art.
Intense. =o Though, so far with just straight action it doesn't promise much else for those quick to reject comics after a couple of pages, so adding in some narration would be shrewd. =]
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hey! looks good so far
CHAOSDRAGONLANCE
2007-05-29 05:07:46
Hey, reading the rough helps get a feel for the storyline. Keep it going!
YMMARRIN
2007-05-23 22:09:56
very nice line work. I really want to know more about the characters and world they are in now. I actually might be able to color for you starting in June. How many pages do you need painted? You can post on my profile to answer.
UNCOMMONCALIBUR
2007-05-07 08:13:58
wow this is a really action packed manga nice job!!
MANGASUPREME234
2007-05-06 12:35:58
wow this is a really action packed manga nice job!!
MANGASUPREME234
2007-05-06 12:35:43
Very good compared to the rest of the stuff here. But your main problem regarding the art, is that your hair looks sorta lame in some parts. Its oversimplified sometimes. I suggest more texture on the hairs, or accentuate their outlines, making the ends with thinner outlines and thinker as they go towards the head, or visa versa. Or altogether darkening all the outlines. Some of the best mangas are drawn with hella thick lines. Example: hellsing, although has shitty story, has great art.
LEADANDIRON
2007-04-24 19:25:14
that was sooo good. i was hoping some day I would be good enough to make a comic. lol. Yours is really good.
LOVELESSKITTY16
2007-04-18 17:24:27
wow that was cool
SHADOSTAR2
2007-04-11 18:35:24
i want more :(
SATUAPPLE
2007-04-11 09:46:41
that was some super happy fun time if i ever somewhat saw it
DRAGONSHAOS
2007-04-10 00:01:58
sweet. more :)
HEMPO22
2007-04-07 03:52:44
Intense. =o Though, so far with just straight action it doesn't promise much else for those quick to reject comics after a couple of pages, so adding in some narration would be shrewd. =]
STELLITA
2007-04-06 12:17:46
WAY COOL!!! I wish I could make something with this much awsome detail! >.< POP
NOODLEFREAK88
2007-04-06 09:25:58
I love watching your process, thanks for sharing it this way!
YMMARRIN
2007-04-05 13:26:22
nice! it would b better with some speech like goddess1098 said tho...
ALWAYS
2007-04-04 05:35:21