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Single Trinity
Butterflies on roses
All painted red
Feelings of joy
Mingled with dread
Dew drops on faces
Close to the ground
Redoing horror
In dreams without sound
Fingers entwined
With warmth on their chests
Searching for truth
When east equals west
Pictures of failure
Clouding their heads
Fearing their parting
Regret in their stead
Breathing in faster
Around and around
Answers in heart beats
Where riddles are found
Tigers and lilies
Breaking the test
Running in circles
And crying for rest
Feelings of roses All painted dread Redoing faces Clouding their stead Searching entwined Close to the sound Fearing their failure Around and found Answers still faster Breaking the rest Running in lilies With warmth on their west
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The sun sets in the west and leaves a warm glow there until night.
what does "warmth on their west" mean?
I actually thought the last part was really interesting. You really know how to conjure powerful moods and images.
BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN AS ALWAYS ON SO WONDERFULLY BEAUTIFULLY UNDOUTINGLY PASIONATE YOU ARE
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This is just a random poem. i was bored. The last part is kind of retarded, but if you like it please say. If you like it better without the last part, I would love to know that too. Any critizism is welcome.