ok the coloring is pretty good. i dont like the shape of the head or the hair. the eyes look a little odd to me. i see u hide the hands too. lol i like it in the sense of the colors u used. the dog is cute

BCAKESCW

2007-10-11 18:50:57

cool. its better then i could do. good job!

LITTLEBLUE91

2007-08-26 17:42:45

Hmm.... so you are actually a novelist? Hmm, the drawing looks crude, but still i would like to know more. Thats really all i can say. Truthfully much work must be done, but for a beginner its very good. Keep working on it, and your bound to make better works of art, of perfection.

SUPERNET2

2007-08-22 18:54:24

here's the names of the people: girl in frount wearing contacts with dyed hair: velvet smith (she is my ailis for tp), brown hair gril: extra(no name), black hair girl that got cut off: serinaty, other black hair girl who's facing away:sarah.

DRAGONKNIGHT888

2007-08-20 18:45:17

Who is they I forget..Is one of them Candy? I love Candy she is my favorite character....

THUNDERANGEL

2007-08-20 18:25:25

nice!!!!!! but then the girl in the front: her shoulder blades are way off i think........or maybe itsh just me haha but over all good!! but then as you realize the girl with brown hair in the back......when she turns her head like that her hair needs to be more either down or flipping up more or so, dun you think? or maybe she can have gel on haha well good job!

LILAZNGURL714

2007-08-20 18:14:29

work on anatomy

KHGIRL

2007-08-20 15:36:40

*laffs* kay, i acept that, i guess thats why the eye ooked a bit off, kinda cute and funny when u mention that....

GINKAZERYUU

2007-08-18 19:14:56

one thing needs to be explained! this is not my best work and the girl in frount is wearing contacts, that is why the shadow does not go under the eye lid. also i'm still woking on her hairstule so it's a work in progress...and the girl in back with brown hair is an extra that i spent absoutly no time on.

DRAGONKNIGHT888

2007-08-18 17:52:21

hey, not that bad, but u need major work on ur faces. ur eyes and face outline, esspecially. practice, practice, practice!! chris heart bishojo book has great face angels and face drawing stuff u could do. also, the girl in the fronts hair is a bit confusing.. and the girl behind her face is off.......but don't worry!! i used to draw like that too, but u r already showing sighns of unique style!!! keep on going, and soon, you'll be really good!!!

GINKAZERYUU

2007-08-18 15:02:42