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I Wish
I wish there was something i could do
Or something i could say
That could help you
And take all your troubles away
I wish i could hold you
And tell you everything will be alright
That theres nothing i won't do for you
And your troubles will soon be out of sight
But for me and you
Even if wished apon a shooting star
wishes don't come true
There is only a scar
I feel helpless sometimes :(
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:'( sad... awwws hunny... i know, everyone feels that way. that somehow, we can all help the ones we care about and love. sometimes we feel so useless... we can go into depression mode. when we can't do the things we want to, to just hold them and tell them you care. to be able to wipe away the tears... its hard when we can't do that, right? so ur not alone in this.
SAKURA3414
2008-08-07 19:54:49
theres nothing i wont do 4 u. ily.
ALWAYSLOVEHIM2
2008-07-27 23:05:15
liked it up till the last stanza, the lines were a little wierd, like you were searching for the right thing to say but couldnt find it
TWILIGHTSTAR12
2008-07-12 11:36:27
me too i feel that way alot! ur so understanding!^_^
SAKUYA156
2008-07-07 07:21:02
so coooool u'r so good its amazin' i wish i could covey my felings like that but whos the other person u talk about in it?
CHIBIL
2008-07-01 11:43:31
awww i wanna hug u now *hugs*
KOAME
2008-06-29 14:22:37
this 1 was really good luved it keep writing
BEAUTY2LOVEU
2008-06-28 10:12:10
hm awesome poem you did a wonderful job on that one i love it ^^
SWEETLY92
2008-06-23 10:20:41
i love tis soo much!*pop*
BLACKBLOODSISTER
2008-06-08 12:54:19