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Beneath your smile

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Beneath your smile

                             

 A smile was spread upon your face,

            I looked beneath it and spied woe in its place,

and tear drops that fell - so silently,

you tried to laugh - tried to fool me,

            yet beneath your laughter,

I heard your sobs,

             and couldnt help,

myself but sob,

               You asked me, "Are you hurt? What did I do?"

                I replied, "You wont cry, so i'll cry for you." 


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I had an assignment to write as many poems as possible under the theme of fake smiles...this is one of the...eleven? Any-whom enjoi!

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Cool

12.12.2007 02:22 PM


its good

12.09.2007 11:30 AM


good work

12.09.2007 08:46 AM


i did nice smiling mask...

12.08.2007 11:25 PM


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