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A smile was spread upon your face,
I looked beneath it and spied woe in its place,
and tear drops that fell - so silently,
you tried to laugh - tried to fool me,
yet beneath your laughter,
I heard your sobs,
and couldnt help,
myself but sob,
You asked me, "Are you hurt? What did I do?"
I replied, "You wont cry, so i'll cry for you."
Cool
its good
good work
i did nice smiling mask...
I had an assignment to write as many poems as possible under the theme of fake smiles...this is one of the...eleven? Any-whom enjoi!