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~My Beloved(shounen-ai/yaoi)ch.3~

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~My Beloved(shounen-ai/yaoi)ch.3~

"Take-chan.  Take-chan!"  Shin whispered in Takeshi's ear with a gentle voice, gentle enough to lull the latter to an even deeper sleep. 
"W-wha-?"
"Morning.  Hey, do you want to go to the theme park with me?"Shin asked as he carressed(i think i spelt that wrong xD) Takeshi's smooth hair. 
"Sure.  Sounds fun.  Just let me get dressed."
"You can use the shower if you want,"Shin said the boy laying in his bed.
"Thanks!"Takeshi hugged his boyfriend tightly, and ran to the bathroom. 

 


"Wow!  It looks so~ fun," Takeshi said as they climbed out of the taxi,"I haven't been to a them park in years!"  His boyfriend smiled at him as he payed for the entrance tickets.
They entered the park and the first ride that poor Shin was forced to go on, was "The Killer".

 

"I LOVE THIS RIDE!  It's been my favorite since I was 10 years old"Takeshi said as they waited in line. 

 

Their small car climbed up the tracks, ready to be released.  The small vehicle raced down the hill, the wind so strong that the two in the car were about to blown out of the ride.  Shin sat there, holding onto Takeshi's hand with his eyes closed.  Takeshi's eyes were wide-open from all of the wind in his face.

The ride turned upside-down twice, and tilted the cart half-way to the side.  The ride continued for two more minutes  before halting to a stop a few feet from the exit.

"That was so cool,"shouted Takeshi as they walked out.  "I-It was alright,"said Shin quietly,"I'm thirsty.  Let's go get something to drink."
They walked toward the small food stand and asked for two water bottles. 
"Where do you want to go next?" asked Shin after taking a nice long drink of his water. 
"Hmm.....how about....the ferris-wheel!"

They boarded the small cariage and sat themselves right next right next to each other.  The giant wheel began to move. 

"Takeshi, are you having fun?"
"Of course!  Especially since I'm here with you,"Takeshi smiled at grabbed Takeshi's hand.

"Takeshi....."Shin pulled the latter closer to him and kissed him deeply. 
His tongue carressed Takeshi's bottom lip, asking for entrance to his mouth.  Takeshi opened his mouth slightly, giving Shin enough space to enter his mouth. 


bwahahahaha xD  i'm evil!  you have to wait til the next chapter to see what happens xD


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ok....here's part 3....*dies* i don't know how to continue it! i know i can't just let it end there, but i don't know how to write sex scenes! it's difficult!!!!! i've tried it before and i failed! *cries* *gets shot*

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awsome!!!!!!

02.24.2008 10:19 PM


this is awsome hurry up and do the next chapter XD and can u help me coz i wanna do a yaoi fiction ^_^??

01.20.2008 01:57 PM


ARG! I wanna know!!! *glares* Very cute!

12.04.2007 03:15 PM


Wow...I..I like it...:nose bleed: XD

11.20.2007 04:57 PM


I can't wait for the next chapter! >.< This story is wonderful! I luv it!!!

09.21.2007 06:52 PM


yeah tell me about it! writing a love scene is so difficult....i always end up sounding just like some harlequen writer

09.16.2007 10:54 AM


..*glares* she-devil!

09.11.2007 04:28 PM


you should ask animemakesmehyper. she is really good at yaoi fics. (^.^) but this is good so far.

09.09.2007 06:55 PM


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