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Running away

For as long as I can remember I have ran. Ran from love, ran from pain, and ran for the sheer joy of it. That the reason why I brought a huge house. I bought the house beacause of it twisting, winding, very long road. And that's the only reason. Every morning I wake up, and put on my running clothes, go outside, and run  along the road.

But this morning something wasn't right, I was pumped, so I was doing my stretches. But their was a fog coming in, and the air smelt like ozone, and something else. Something that I had never smelt before. Something dangerous. Something not human. I started to run back to the house, when a blast of air blew into my ear. I turned around and screamed, out of the fog, walked something from the horror genre. It had black eyes, that seemed to glow, and resembled a..... wolf. And then I passed out.


A work in progress... suggestions? , Kind of a prologue

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Interesting... with the house and all.. but I don't see the connection between the house and running away..... Yeah, there's a road, but.... couldn't you go running to any old place? It would be nice if there was a liiittle bit more description... There were some SPG errors... but... >< I"m sorry!! But it does seem promising. ^__^

2007-12-25 22:41:41


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