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I am the life

I am the life

You are the soul

Here in the darkness,

I am alone

No one to find me

No one to mourn

Because I am the life

You are my soul.

 

I cannot move

I cannot see

No one to find me

I am incomplete

My life is a void

I cannopt hear,

Because I am your life

And you are my soul.

 

I am dying,

No longer afarid

Too much is happening

Just lost, no fear

Run Run

I run

Because I am your life

And you lost my soul ...

 


A poem .... It might be a bit emo but critique away

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great poem...yes, it's 'emo' but it's a really well done poem...

ERYARON3


2009-05-18 17:50:16


that is sad and a little emo......I LOVE IT!!!

REN14LOVE


2009-05-02 02:06:42


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