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Left alone

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Left alone

I feel a chill go through my spine.

I open my eyes. I'm sitting on the side of a road. As I slowly look up, it's snowing. My back against a tree. I feel weak, like I can't move my body. Am I hurt? I look at myself. All I have on are my regular clothes, no coat, no hat, no sweater, no gloves. And its snowing and freezing outside. As I try to get up, I feel faint.

Once I control my balance, I see a figure in the distance. Almost invisible, but still there. I begin to walk slowly, my legs feeling numb from the cold. But each step i take, for some reason makes the figure look farther away. I walk a little faster, reaching my hands towards the figure. I try to yell help, but my voice, its gone. I fall to my knees, tears coming out.

I hear a whistle in the wind. I shiver. The figure appears in front of me. An angel with black wings. I look up, he mouths the words "I love you", then disappears. I stare into the road. I get up and walk down the road. Maybe I'll find my angel with white wings at the end of this road. My angel with white wings. The one who won't leave me alone with no goodbye........

                                   dedicated to those whose hearts have been broken......

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Cool that is some good writing! POP

10.29.2007 07:50 PM


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