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The Tragic Suicide
what could have happened?
what went so wrong?
to end your own life
it wasn't so long.
you were all she had
how does she feel?
she must be confused.
was his death real?
so she sits and cries
what should she do?
she must not have been
important to you
she tries to be good
keep her life straight
but her anger grows
drowning in hate
she saw what you did
she won't be the same
she will not get caught
in your twisted game
in all that she knew
nothing makes since
your blood on the wall
is just too intense
she wants to run
she wants to cry
but nothing will help
so she will die
she's not important
or he'd be alive
he's no longer here
her future deprived
the gun is right there
the trigger ignites
her soul is at ease
she turns out the lights.
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wow i love this one its so......awesome
Oh shit....very good! The tragedy rivals Horrible Images, for the fact that you didn't have to write all of those nasty words for others to see what was happening...very good^^
Very well written. Sad, but stuff like this happens.
It's so sad.....T T.......It's sad when people do that. What about the ones who love and care for them? How will they feel? They're just taking the easy way out......I feel so sorry for your friend.....
wow
A truly sad story.
i like it its so sad
my friends father commited suicide (blew his brains out) and she found his body. ever so tragic. i wrote this poem in social studies class. (we were watching a movie anyway)
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aww... how sad.. *sniffs sniffs*
SAKURA3414
06.30.2008 06:59 PM