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when the truth dies, we all go downhill with it.

swept by the ashes of a life untold

memories fade as truth's unfold

from journies rough through rain and sand

and everything we've been through, yet together we stand

in the life i've lived i found so much

but i'd trade it all to feel your touch

the moment of truth filled with nothing but lies

and a life without you would be my demise

in a world where we're together is paradise to me

and a smile on your face is all i wanna see

just promise you'll stay and i'll continue living

don't worry about your mistakes cause i'll just keep forgiving

i'll wait forever it that's what it takes

i'll do anything to make sure your heart never breaks.

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Thank you baby! I'm glad you like it! i love you!

JAZZYJAZZ1213


2008-10-25 12:34:12


Yeah this is a incredibly beatiful poem Jazzy,I love it^^

THEJOKER92


2008-10-23 13:15:22


awwwwwwwwww i love it its so so sweet

DARKSHADOW101


2008-09-21 10:17:25


awwwwww

PHANTOMTHEIFDARK


2008-09-18 14:08:30


Thejoker was the inspiration for it! ^-^

JAZZYJAZZ1213


2008-09-17 13:36:48


awwwwwwwwww! thank you! i think i'm getting better at poetry!

JAZZYJAZZ1213


2008-08-30 12:38:23


This is a shadowed sunlit quality love poem..hmm...I wonder should I make a fifth? *pop* Love ya Kagura!!

DARKFOX1992


2008-08-28 06:59:00


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