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the encounter between the two future heroes (jeff&star)

starfire started thinkg to herself: wow this planet sure is strange its like nothing i have ever seen before, i wonder where can i start searching for this jeff guy what if he isn`t even on this planet it would be a waste but if i can fix myself up then it would not be a total waste. as she kept thinking she decided to head towards the town to start her search. as she entered town she started asking people if they knew someone named jeff but everyone either gave her an ugly look  told her i never heard of this kid,or didn`t even notice her this was because of four reasons 1) she was so beaten up that she was walking in a limp because her leg  was kinda broken, 2)her clothes were ripped 3)she had white wings. to some they would be beutifull because they looked almost magical with there brithness and size but this time they were hurt so they look strange and ugly.this was also beacuse most humans have never actually seen an angel before 4)most poeple couldn`t see her. and all of this made her look like an invisible weird bum but star was persistent and eventually she ran into some guy (an angel in disguise) who pointed her into jeff`s direction. the guy said "he is across the street in that restaurant" the guy pointed to a fancy restaurant across the street.as she entered the restaurant  a man told her "no bums aloud especially weird ones" as he stared at her hurt wings.star said why i never....forget it im just here to see that guy as she pointed at a goth looking guy with silvery black hair. this will ony take a minute she said as she rushed toward jeff. as she stands over him she says are u jeff without looking up he says "yeah who wants to know"ummm starfire who else would i be she responded. "never heard of u" he said. thats kinda the reason i am here i need your help. when she said that he looked up "awww crap another angel there persistant, what happened to you why are u all beat up"star sat next to him and said in an emberresed tone i really don`t know i just woke up like this yesterday "do u even remeber anything he said" no not really well exept for the prophecy "what prophecy he said" let me explain it the prophecy says that you will obtain angel powers because of the overloard and you will hold the key 2 saving humanity and aliens alike "that prophecy sounds like a load of bullsh.... wait a minute did u say overlord the demons who attacked me the first time all those years ago said the overload sent me that means he was the one who sent the demons to kill my parents ok you cought my attention what else do u know" well thats all i know because i can`t remeber anything else *ughhhh wraps her hands on her head*i can`t remeber, every time i try my head hurts like crazy *relaxes and puts hands down*well i do know that the angels after you really do need yout help and if you try to help them im sure one day you will find the overlord and take him down and i will be there to help "and why is that" *he says with a mouthfull of food*because im your angel now my previous human gave me a mission and it was to find you and become your angel "were is she"i don`t really know "well if your going to help me out how about  how about we fix you up *looking at her wings* and we can start tomorrow" he said as he got up and both of them walked out of the restaurant *jeff thinking:finally a clue that will lead me to the one who killed my parents. when i find him he will pay* *then clenched his right hand* what is it star said"its nothing"  


this is the chapter where starfire and jeff finally meet tell me ur opinion on it

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awwwwww thanks guys espiacially u freakycallbackgirl10

2008-07-27 15:15:56


I loved it!

2008-07-27 13:47:31


i luvded it ^_^ i cant wait til u post mor!!! ^_~

2008-07-26 21:15:34


cool stuff! like the way they meet.

2008-07-26 08:23:30


thanks guys

2008-07-25 18:04:03


that's really good! i wanna read more!

2008-07-25 15:50:33


me like...its really good^_^ *POP*

2008-07-25 11:27:05


wow, i like how they meet- good job *pop*

2008-07-24 20:27:35


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