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PAGE FIFTEEN
Panel One: Sama crawls under his bed.
Panel Two: Similar shot as panel one, but now we can't see Sama at all. His dialog balloon trails out from under the bed.
1/SAMA: 10 ... 9 ... 8 ... 7 ...
Panel Three: Camera moves closer into the shot. We can now see Sama curled up under his bed. He has his eyes closed tightly. His arms are crossed across his chest.
2/SAMA: 6 ... 5 ... 4 ...
Panel Four: Closer still. We can see the worry lines on Sama's forehead, and maybe a little drop of sweat.
3/SAMA: 3 ... 2 ... 1 ...
Panel Five: Nothing happens. Same shot as panel four, close on Sama with his eyes closed.
Panel Six: Same as before, only now Sama opens his eyes with a funny expression on his face. Jake, this is all you -- you gotta make this pic sing! I'm going for that "oh boy, that was a waste of my time" look, mixed with that pained dashing of hope that leaves Sama feeling like "now what?"
Of course, some things just take a little extra bit of time...
I had originally though the countdown would be best in numbers (10, 9, 8...) but when I saw it lettered, it had a really strange feel, so we switched it to spelling out the numbers (ten, nine, eight...). Part of it was that last balloon. A single "1" felt like it was not a word -- it was too lonely. "One" fit so much better.