On a full moon night, Kyla would have never seen this coming!”Please stop,” she cried desperately.”Please let go of me Vallon.” Pushing her to the floor, he stood over her and quietly whispered,”if I were to let you go you’d run away, now what fun would that be?”Kneeling to her he brushed his cold lips on her neck. Biting rapturously, he held her down to the iced floor. Kyla was paralyzed in fear. She could see the beast in his eyes with a blood thirsty look on his face. She tried to fight him off, but he was to strong.”A vampire like Vallon could kill me in an instant.” She didn’t know any spells to reflect him off. She thought while being covered in blood. Kyla had no hope of rescue or that Vallon would ever be himself again. Her love trapped in a darkened corner. What could she do? A gun in her left pocket, but she was the only one who could pull the trigger. With little breath and strength she had she pulled out the gun. Vallon then backed away slowly,” you wouldn’t dare pull it; if so I’d be sure to kill you.”Kyla loved Vallon so much, but for her own safety, she had no choice.” Vallon I love you…BAM…NO!” Kyla shrieked. Running toward Vallon she saw a shadow, but couldn’t see clearly. ”who would kill Vallon…? I wasn’t really going to… I had the safety on!” she cried uncontrollably. Touching his smooth cheeks and kissed his soft lips.” Why?”With Blood dripping onto his forehead, and grabbing her wrist, “Kyla… please… help me.” Vallon said in pain.
This story is about love, but a girl must find a way through blood and pain before she can get what she wants. If i can get enough comments on my story ill continue it and on day it will become a book(hopefully)
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that was a great story i am sure i would make a great book i mean it had suspence and action and love the three main points of any great book plus most love books like that i do you are a great writer you should keep writing and make it into a book : >
SWEETLY92
2008-03-21 13:16:49
please people who read this add a comment. Im tryin to make a book out of this and it would be awesome if i could get some views on it!!!!!!!!!!
KACORU
2008-03-18 21:36:54