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Darkness

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ADDED: 02.21.2008

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Darkness

I'm all alone nobody here,

I cry out for peace praying

that somebody come.

 

But nobody come,

I shut myself in

darkness deep

into the depth

of hell.

 

I feel the heat

I feel the pain

I feel the sorrow

of the people thats

in hell.

 

some body please

help me as I raised

my hand and said

princess as I burn

in darkness.


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this is how i feel after all i was always in darkness i would like to see this world burn to the ground

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I DNT EVR WANNA FELL LIK THT AND WHEN I DO .............

06.21.2008 01:49 AM


i agree, that how i always feel now

06.19.2008 08:45 AM


I would not like to see the world burn because then that means the few I do care about will burn with it. But I do like the poem. You have great talent.

05.22.2008 01:16 PM


to darkness is part of life, in a way, i know how it feels. so again ur not alone pop

04.16.2008 09:33 AM


I am Queen of darkness so i shud also no how that feels! nd ur rite.

04.08.2008 06:49 AM


very deep...deeper than deep

03.26.2008 08:15 AM


ur so good keep on writing=D pop

03.18.2008 07:42 PM


Wow this is really deep!!!!

03.15.2008 06:30 AM


wow if i was there i would help. I would never leave anyone in darkness. because it is not a place for someone to live in.Trust me i know i've been there.

02.27.2008 12:17 PM


oh wow that is so cool ans yet very sad srry u feel that way maybe i can help lol jk

02.26.2008 03:16 PM


im always in darkness in pain so much theres nobody to save me from it.

02.23.2008 04:46 PM


wow your soooooo good

02.23.2008 04:22 PM


LUV IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i can't put it in words how good this is!

02.22.2008 03:00 PM


luv it! i feel the same way a lot of the time.

02.22.2008 02:56 PM


thank you OMG thats exscly how i feel when the sun becomes a bumeme of daeth and sprad thought the grass and kills eveyone in its path and i well be on the talliest mountian launfing at all the pain and sufering ahahahah

02.22.2008 07:42 AM


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