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The perfect poem



why do we human hurt each other it's so very sad i want to help as many people that i can in this world ......before i die do i have to change my self just to go to heaven? why is this world so sad i wish i can save it but i can't the girl that i love so much does not see she is in so much pain and lost the souless look in her eyes but it seem that everytime i hold her in my arms she just don't feel me everytime i make love with her she don't feel the passion that i give her she don't care then she killed her self stab her self in the heart*crying* why why did u do it i love u so much and I'm left with darkness in my heart and soul why do ppl kill them self? god i beg of u please answer me why do ppl kill them self as it start to rain left in darkness
why does my heart hurt so much so this is what she felt to the point were she can no longer live or be love ever again i went back to her body and use the same knife to stab my self in my heart as i lay there dieing at last we are together forever.


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Added 2008-03-18 00:20:58
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This wasnt the perfect poem. Did you ever think that maybe u could have never helped her. There were so many diffrent people out there, u 2 were jus 2 different puzzle peices tryin 2 fit 2gether. U couldnt save her and thats okay. But maybe she wanted 2 saved u from the increasing pain she kept putting on u. Maybe im wrong but u fell 4 the devils trap

2008-10-20 13:43:58


cool

2008-04-16 09:21:18


it made me cry it's so sad

2008-04-12 01:08:18


i love it!!!!!!!!! *sob,sob* it is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sad!!!!!!!:((((:(((((((((

2008-03-26 15:05:18


*tears*tragic!

2008-03-19 16:34:39


WOW.................i's is so sad but still way cool

2008-03-19 15:02:41


so sad T_T

2008-03-18 19:52:45


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