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Dark shadow

The moon is dark and hollow....

I lay in my death bed in the dark

the scene is calm all A round

I stop 2 listen then I hear A sound

I go 2 look very discreet

I look and listened as my heart beats...

I see my maker

the the prince of death the soul take

I stop in my tracks and try 2 flee

but the prince of death catches me...

I stop the struggle him displeased

and say claim my soul I am now free...


the shadow of the reaper...

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Tags: i,  hope,  u,  like  Added 2008-08-05 14:59:12
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wow that was great.. i love wat u worte in ur poem.. pleaz make more soon ur really good.. Hug..!! >.

SAKURACLASS


2008-09-19 17:23:29


AWSOME THATWAS ONE OF THE BEST POEMS IVE EVER READ WELL ACTULLY THE BEST POEM IVE EVER READ AWSOME JOB

ROCKSTAR45FUZZY


2008-08-13 09:02:11


i love it!!!*pop*

DNANGLE101


2008-08-08 10:12:04


cool

KURTANDLOGAN2


2008-08-06 10:17:04


cool, it nice.

BLUESWORDOFNK97


2008-08-06 09:14:47


wow, thats really cool! you should deff put that under your fiction. the only thing id change is to spell out two instead of 2, but thats just a preference. deff pop ^.^~

TWILIGHTSTAR12


2008-08-05 15:05:45


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