Born to kill live to die a yu yu hakusho story 2
hiei's pov-
the baka ona we had caught ran away, i followed after her, and eventualy found her bloody and passed out in the middle of the forest.
*sigh, baka ona made me run all this way* you think before walking over to her, and picking her up.
" drop her!" a chilling voice says.
you whirl around and see a freak in a blck robe and a mask!!!(yeah... )
"as if this baka ona is now property of the spirit world" you say and then think* wtf... a freak in a mask, and me defending a baka ona... *
"actualy that girl belongs to me..."
"i don't see you name on her"
" check the back of her neck.." and you do.
"I'll be damned"
on the back of the baka ona's neck was a strange black mark that swirled like an eye.
" i plan to use that girl to create a war, and if she disobeys me that mark will activate... i know that noramaly this information would be invaluble, but my plan is too far in action now to stop it... fine take the girl if you wish, she will just kill you all." he said before dissapearing back into the shadows...
another clifhanger!
yeah another comment so here it is!!!^_^
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I love this very much!! n_n
SUSHIMEI
2008-05-09 10:00:04
okay! I will take your comments into consideration!!! thank you all for the comments, and invite your friends!^_^
KIRAKAGE
2008-05-03 15:44:32
I love it, please keep going. I can't wait for the next one!
KHEARTS
2008-05-02 16:03:59
So dramatic!!(Sp?) Please keep it up!! *POP* Again you should make them longer. There not bad it's just that people like to read long stories.
ASSKISSER
2008-05-02 15:54:01