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before u leave...

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ADDED: 02.16.2008

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before u leave...

Before you leave,

Kiss me like you have

Never kissed me before,

I want to feel alive once more…

 

Before you leave,

Hug me like you have

Never hugged me before,

I don’t want to feel alone…

 

Not yet…

 

I can’t do this

With my heart barely beating…

I can’t do this

When I know the end is just

A few minutes away…

 

You know what’s

Gonna happened to me

After you leave,

And you still do it?...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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that is soooo sad...but i love it!!!!...*pop*

06.22.2008 08:21 AM


that is soooo sad...but i love it!!!!...*pop*

06.22.2008 08:21 AM


luv it...it's sad...but still very good^^ *pop*

04.24.2008 12:52 PM


wow

04.18.2008 06:37 AM


deep deep stuff...

03.26.2008 09:41 AM


thanks everyone for your comments, i'll let you know when i write another one, im working in a couple more

03.17.2008 03:38 AM


thats sum tuff stuff! keep it up *pop*

03.14.2008 10:56 AM


i liked it i hope you keep writing *smiles*

03.09.2008 11:14 AM


thats weird bc im moving soon....

02.23.2008 04:40 PM


wow...........thats deep! its totaly awesum!

02.23.2008 09:56 AM


THIS IS SO DEEPP I LOVE IT.!!!

02.23.2008 09:51 AM


wow this is really sad

02.22.2008 04:11 AM


DUDE THAT ISS AWSOME!

02.21.2008 11:31 AM


-sniff- thats good peom ^^ Welli right peoms too so if you want to veiw them send me a pm and ill post a few in my blog. ps keep up the good work.

02.21.2008 10:35 AM


U r so good at writing these blogs this poem is awesome. keep up the good work

02.20.2008 07:14 AM


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