Melville worked for the princess like all the others, and never went beyond the city walls. After a mysterious encounter with a strange man he found out the truth. (20 pages - B&W and colors - I drew all the pages in about a week, so it's really rushed and it could be better. ^^; Trippy child story.)
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Wow this is a great story. I love your drawings and imagination it's sooo good. It's good too because it's got a unique idea which makes it so much more enjoyable to read!=)
AIYA121
2008-02-14 15:51:52
This concept is very imaginitive. I really enjoyed it, and hope to see more.
KURIR
2007-10-30 19:52:33
This is a very good story. I like the artwork too. It looks great and not rushed at all.
OGONRANGER
2007-10-30 17:22:15
This is great. I hope you make more. *pop*
ZAN18
2007-09-12 10:06:47
I gotta say this is pretty good!
THUNDERKIDD001
2007-08-21 10:08:37
The art in this story was great. And the story borad is straight and clear. I give this a Ten out of Ten. X3
HARUNA5191
2007-08-02 22:28:21
It doesn't seem that rushed...I think you did really good! Your toning is cool, and I really like the character design of the crow-man...I like theoutfit the main character is wearing...it's cool. The only bit you need to work on is establishing what's going on a bit more. At first it was a bit hard to tell that everyone in the kingdom was making goods for the princess... Other than that, I think it's pretty good! Your page layouts are good as well!! ^--^
THEPOTATOPRINCESS
2007-07-30 15:30:14
very interesting and very good art, i like the design of the main character, well done and good start cloud
CLOUDSTRIFEVII
2007-07-30 13:03:50
cool story. ^_^
BOOGIE2IT
2007-07-26 22:13:16
The art and story are both really well made. You knew what you were doing and did a good job. There were some grammar errors here and there, I'd suggest you fix that soon. Otherwise, good start of an interesting story.
NAMANAM
2007-07-24 21:41:13
im flabergasted this is mazin!!!! pop!
SHINOBU
2007-07-24 09:28:45
!!!!!!! a week?! that's amazing! i would've done much worse if i was to rush! that's effin good!
MONKEE626
2007-07-23 18:40:30