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Burdened
My smiles are smiled but
Smiled slowly.
Eyes dead
Mind burdened
Words from my mouth go
Unheard
Slashes of the pen are angrily made
Across the paper
Stolen from me were many
Memories
I go in search of the
Truth
My printed words are personalized
Can you see your name imprinted
On the private space?
Between the lines
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i said it b4 and ill say it again.DEEP DUDE DEEP!defenit from the soul
is this you writing poems?? sounds like its describing the hard work of a very concentrated person writing something that deals with hidden truths....hmm truthfully, idont exactly understand your poem ehehe but it gets you hooked and wandering what it means or refers to :) and im curious; please explain if posssible :) but its still really impressive writing
the 1st thing that came 2 my mind was a person in my life that i have a huge disregard for bcuz of somethin they did to me but instead of being direct with that person by lashing out, i simply write a song about em u know keep it sublime lol i dont know if thats wats it actually about but thats wat i felt XD
thanx and no i dont mind if you put it on your blogs... as long as you dont start claimin it as urs ^^!jk
Love it, you have a certain flair for poetry!
i want it want it!! hehehe...HA HA HA HA (hit my head at wall *4) POp
NNNNNIIIIIICCCCCCCEEEEEE LOVE IT!!!! MIND IF I PUT ON MY BLOGS??
that was some deep poetry i love it post more!!!!!
thats really cule me likey big time.
i like it its really good tell me when u post more^^
cool it iz great!!!!!
thanks for you guys comments. and i know i misspelled which whitetrain i saw the mistake right after i posted this. i know this is weird but i wouldnt call it normal....although now im self-conscious about it...
I liked it, it did kick my brain's ass, but I still like it. Hey you might want to check your comment though. You put an e instead of a w in which.
Very good ur wording... it really does mess with ur mind... but i like it...
i'm sorry i dont like it that much but its ok, not bad not great just ok
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Warning: this poem may be a little eccentric it might kick your brains ass. Note: i am not callin you stupid i wrote the poem and it f***s with my brain too. ehich is why i love it and i hope you like it too.