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Afraid

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Afraid

      Are you afraid of love? of his sweet tender kisses? that makes you think of his face and the words that he whispered.

      Or is love afraid of you? does it forsake you all of its hidden powers? is it a foreboding shadow? that lurks after you day by day but never decides to show its face.

       Until....one day love doesnt hide. its not a shadow. but a welcome visitor with light brown skin and big full lips and beautiful brown eyes that always seem to hypnotize and daze you.

       But love is said to come at a price and now you wonder if this price comes will i pay or will love become that foreboding shadow i knew  and if i pay will his eyes cease to hypnotize and daze me.

        In the end love is the choice that you are forced to choose because even if his eyes cease to hypnotize and daze and his lips arent so tender after awhile. it is better to have love and lost than not to have loved at all.

 

P.s the way you read it is probaly not hte way its supposed to be read. I read kind of slow and i dont know what to call it, sexy? maybe, but whatever hope you enjoy.


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I dont know what to say about this really, i was just trying to help my friend with her english assignment when i wrote it. but i think its okay and maybe, just maybe its one of those sappy poems but maybe not so let me know. ^_^

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Beautiful, just...*smiles as the tear drips down*

05.03.2008 06:36 PM


it says a lot about me, love then lose? normal for many *POP* good one,i like it

04.12.2008 11:07 PM


i like the last lines alot. it fits it very well. the situation seems kinda iffy. like what if he stops looking at you that way or if you lose sight of that impression of him. but its like the last sentence says.

04.10.2008 06:05 PM


its great!! honestly its how i feel about love.

02.23.2008 10:07 AM


This pec of work is grate

02.21.2008 05:19 PM


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