Mudstar came back from patrol with her new deputy Guststorm who was her first apprentice,and their apprentices who are
Stormpaw and Icepaw .She smiled at her son and daughter who each caught a two mice ,When they came up the hill to
Thunderclan camp" Now you two put your freshkill in the pile and the both of you can take one of the mice to the elders
and who knows they might tell you a story?. The both of them said "awesome! " and ran down the hill to the camp , "come
guststorm we have to talk about shadowclan *padding into her den *" they are getting too close to the border ,we have to
talk to Wildstar at the next gathering. " yes we should and i think we should get more patrols and renew our scent marks."
" Yes Guststorm we should ......Guststorm i want you to take morning patrol with icepaw and some warriors? Mudstar
said sitting down " ok mudstar " Guststorm bowed his head and left the den. "what are we gonna do we shadowclan? "
Mudstar sighed , then fell asleep. " Where am i ? " looking around then she saw a black cat " mother?" "yes?" the black
Cat walked up to her " oh i 've missed you so!" touched noses remembering she was killed by a pack of badgers when she was leader
then mudeyes at the time was deputy became leader."so have i daughter " Crowstar why have you brought me here?".
"To show you something" beckoning her to come with her tail "follow me" both cats went through Four Trees where she woke up
When they came to a pool of water " look in it" Crowstar said to mudstar "ok" when mudstar looked in the pool of water
she saw her kits all grown up when other cats came around her ,she remembered Bluestar who died protecting her clan from
evil dogs that Tigerstar had sent to kill Thunderclan, then saw Whitestorm who died in a battle against Bloodclan , Tallstar
who died after they finished the Great journey she was saddened by seeing all the cats her mother told her
about when she was a kit.They all raised their voices and said " Kin Of Kin Will Shake the Forest From Its Roots"
"what does it mean?" Bluestar replied "in time you will know ,but do not worry yet " a soft voice added "
We will tell you when the time comes" feathertail said softly,Mudstar remembered sadly that the beautiful grey she-cat
died saving The Tribe Of Rushing Water ."Please tell my father i am happy watching over the cats i love." ok i 'll tell him"
Mudstar touched noses with the cats around her, and the starry cats disappered . Then mudstar woke up and found
herself in her den, " Guststorm waited outside her den "come in guststorm " "yes mudstar i was just going to go on
morning patrol when i heard you did you have a bad dream?" "no " she was thinking about what Crowstar said and if she
should tell him? " guststorm before you go i want to ask you something? "yes what is it?" " if i told you something important
you wont tell the clan right? " of course not Mudstar" "ok " mudstar told guststorm about her dream but left the part with feathertail
out.
I hoped u enjoyed it ^ ^
TO BE CONTINUED?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I forgot something lol ^ ^
Thunderclan:
Leader: Mudstar: nearly pure black she-cat with purple eyes
apprentice: Stormpaw: Tom, dark grey like thunder clouds with a white chest and green eyes (Mudstar's kit
Deputy: Guststorm: white tom with a grey sploch on forehead
apprentice: Icepaw: She-cat with ice blue coat and ice blue eyes (Mudstar's kit)
Medicine Cat: Whitestorm; pure white tom
apprentice: Spottedpaw: Pure black with dark purple eyes, she-cat (Mudstar's kit)
Warriors: Rainshadow:She-cat, jet-black fur with deep blue eyes and a silver stripe on her left foreleg.
Apprentice: Squirrelpaw: she-cat, calico with big blue eyes, very frisky (Mudstar's kit)
Mudshadow:( mudstars son ).pure white w/black paws and crystal blue eyes
Spottedheart: beautiful pure black with one white paw and a white heart on her back . very swift and has grey eyes
Graystripe: long-haired gray tom
Millie: small silver tabby kittypet
Birchfall: light brown tabby tom
Whitewing: white she-cat with green eyes
Elders: Frostfur: beautiful white she-cat with blue eyes
Longtail: pale tabby tom with dark black stripes,retired early due to failing sight
this is my first story
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MUDEYES
2007-06-19 08:47:05
Sweet! It's da bomb!!!! lol. sory i'm kinda hyper right now!!! Anyways yeah it was awesome!
POUNCECLAW
2007-06-19 06:45:18
both kinda some of the cats r from the book but the rest i made
MUDEYES
2007-06-09 10:45:45
did u get this from the book series or is this ur own?
BLACKROSE768
2007-06-08 14:34:17
I liked it! It's good! ^_^
ICECAT
2007-06-08 12:14:32