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I think I love you. Not only did you give Grinzor a hammer, BUT YOU DID HIS ACCENT!
Love the idea of taking existing pieces from the MLC and messing them up. Very innovative. It did make it pretty long though. A little pruning back would go a long way.
Wow, that was amazing! I'm so in character too. ^-^ Great jorb!
I was with you when you were writing it and I still dont get half of it...T_T and if you were trying to make Kara say "unyuu" well, it's not spelled "amuu" but either way it's just some weird sound thingy so it doesnt matter much...
Wow long dude! but me likes.
Hooray! Very good indeed! But sooooo looooong! O_O
I liked it and giggled in many parts.Its Nice to see MrGBH have a goodguy role, He seems to be the subject in most of the stories!! So far!
Ah!! Thank you!!! *bows* I'm sorry for the longness... TT-TT Yes, I felt bad for MrGBH, and it made sense for him to save the day, he being flabbergasted and therefore late, so I proceeded to do so.... :)
At last, i am in a fiction without being the bad guy. And i even save the day no less. In a suitable ninja style. I must admit that I didn't read all of it, i only read the stuff based on fiction i've already read, which cut down on the time it took to read. Oh, and in the first paragraph you say there are five members, but then list six. Oh well. And txt spk Amy-chan? No wonder i used barbie dolls and Sasunaru to punish them. I've been inspired now to actually write something like that.
I LOVE IT!!! I loved the Amy-chan section and the Gates Between Hearts part... Hilarious! It was a little longer, but I really liked it though. I liked how you used the prompt too. *laughs* Oh my....I love it.... ~ann
I enjoyed this but as other have said it is a bit long. I also notices some typos. But this has peaked my interest in the real stories mentioned.
WOOOAAAAHHHHHH!!!! WOAH WOAH WOAH WOAH!!!!! HOLD IT RIGHT THERE, SPEED RACER!!!!!!!!!!!! WHO-WHA--YOU--TURNED MY CHARACTERS G, G, GGGAAAAAAAYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!! *Starts bawling* *Quickly shuts up* I'll deal with you later, fish....*chilling glare* Anyways, this was very funny. I laughed to death. Enough said. However, it IS a bit too long and kinda....just slightly....wandered away from the main topic. BUT very good, nonetheless. *pops* PS: Grinzor. Return. My. Fan. Now.
Oooopps.... I'll go change that. I'm sorry.....
Mary Sue Marilyn is scary................... *shudder* A pop for you!
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JAPAN
Hehe, hilarious. You had me grinning the whole time. Though admittably most by what you did to your own characters as those are the ones I know best. :D Still, good job on the dwarwish accent!! :D
ZEDR
03:18 PM, 01.20.2008