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neko experament: ch.2

Here I am, in front of the entrance of the maze. There are two ways I can go. Left, or right. If i go to the left, there are laser beems in which I would have to dodge. God only knows what would happen if I were to touch one. I'd rather not know. If I go to the right, there are holes and gashes in the walls, and god only knows what might come out of them. I start to go to the right, whene a scientist shoves me to the left. I am about to ram into a laser beem when I jump 6 feet in the air over the beem. when I land, I am forced to slide underneith the next beem.

   As i continue going threw this never ending streem of beems, I'm guessing that I get struck by one because i feel an unbearrable burning inside my arm. I stop as soon as I get out of the beems and look at my arm. There is blood all down my arm and I realize that I am burned in many more places.

  "Must not have been able to dodge them all." I say to myself. I hold onto my arm tight, trying to get the blood to at least slow down its flow. No luck there.

   "Keep it moving!" I here a scientist yell. Here we go, I have another choice. Die from the remainder of this maze, or die from the electric whip the scientist will pull out if I dont listen. I'de rather die because of the maze, if that's ok with them.

     I hed around the corner and see all kinds of eels and an electric flooring. I think for a second, and then leep as far as I can across the flooring and eels. What I wish would happen doesn't so I'm forced to touch the ground and get neerly electracuted to death. 'Great' I thought.

   I take the other leep and am able to get across the rest of the way. Sadly, when I reach the other side, that was the end of the short, but deadly maze. I am greeted by a scientist who holds a whip. 'Oh no.' He lifts up the whip. 'this is it!'  He lashes it out at me. 'Brace yourself!'

    "Hmm?" I ask. I look up to see a boy holding one end of the whip (the end that would hurt me)

     " Get out o' here!" He yells. "Now, Ida!"

     It has been so long sense anyone has called me by my name. Ida. Who is this boy? How does he know my name?

      The boy leaps at least ten feet in the air and thats when I see his long tail comming out of his pants. "CHRIS!!!" I yell.

       Chris turnes around. "So you finaly figured it out." He takes a pounch at one scientist and a kick at another. The scientist kept comming and comming.  Chris threw lashes at them punches, kicks, he dodge and swiped. He made it look like there was no problem to it. Now that all the scientists are down, and unable to get up, my father comes around and greets Chris.

      "CHris, how I've missed you!" He says. "How have you been?"

      "Living like a rouge. You?" Chris replied.

      " I've been doing ok. Why did you return?"

      Chris looks at me. " I came for her." He says. Then he walks over to me. "Ida, what did they do to you? This is so wrong to do to your own daughter!" He said to father.

      "Well, it's not like we could wach your actions, Chris. you ran away." Father replies.

       Chris turnes me around. "Next time." He says to father. He lifted me up and jumped straight out of the glass on the ceiling. I get a good look  at chris and realise that he grew to be a strong teenage boy. He must be about 17. Chris had black hair, and midnight blue eyes. He was strong, and fast, and smart. Chris... me and chris are finaly togethe rlike old times agin!

       I can't help but smile, but when I do, ther is a pain at the side of my mouth and i let out a quick yelp. Chris looks at me, "You ok?"He askes.

       "I'm fine." I say. "Thanks for saving me."

       "It was no problem, I desided to pay Pops a visit and kick his ass, when I say what they were doing to you. You are badly enjured. Don't worry, I can take care of you.I promise I'll always protect you from now on."

        I smiled and leaned my head aginst his chest. Everything is ok, now. Chris is here, and I'm safe.

        I quickly doze off in chris's arms.


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awesome

2008-08-13 13:39:03


Aw! So cute! I love it soooo much! Keep me posted!

2008-07-29 12:00:14


I like how he takes her. I can't wait to read the rest.

2008-07-25 16:32:46


chris saves the day!!! are they going to fall in love?

2008-07-25 14:27:17


SWEET!!!!!!!!

2008-07-21 10:23:57


really kewl pop

2008-07-21 07:42:42


I love it. I like what is going on. I can't wait for the rest.

2008-07-21 06:53:56


love it pop

2008-07-19 11:15:24


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