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The Other Me

There's a side of me that I often don't show

The side I am terrified of

I keep it locked up

For I fear for the people it may hurt

The people that I have come

to love and adore

So I hide it deep within

my soul, hiding it is painful

But I'd much rather have it

hurt me then my loved ones

Fovever more


I feel I should apologize for this slighty depressing poem.......I know there aren't many of my friends who are use to me being like this. If anyone was wondering NO I'm not emo. Its just something that came to me and one of my friends was tellin' me that I should write a poem....so, here it is. Please comment and if you like it pop/clip as well! Enjoy^.~

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*sighs*..... I never thought dat this poem or any of my poems as being something special...but....all of my good and close friends really seem 2 love it and...I dats just good enough 4 me. (uhm... lol wat?)

2008-07-26 13:38:01


.....nothing special...just ur averagelvl emo poem...i mean..it doesn't talk about anything vaguely unique (you bloomin hell know that!!!)

2008-07-26 07:08:19


Aww! Thanx Bell-chan and Chic-chan!! I'm glad both of u like it so much!! xD

2008-06-09 17:58:11


Its awsome Neko-Chan!!! *pop* *pop* *pop* *pop* Even though I can only pop it once lol But if I could *pop* it four time I would . . . *pop* lol ^^

2008-06-09 17:49:26


*POP* its so good every time i read it.

2008-05-26 10:38:27


Awwww! Thanx Bell-chan^-^

2008-05-05 00:06:34


omg its is so good and i am a poet myself but never i have seen so many people look at mine like yours and i feel like u r just talking 2 me and a write should never aplpgize.

2008-05-04 19:11:00


Awwww! Thanx Death-kun and Razu-kun^-^

2008-04-25 19:06:10


Its really good hana-chan. you dont need to apologize for it, everyone has a side to them that they dont want pthers to see, or are afraid of showing.

2008-04-25 19:03:19


lol. you know that i can relate to this.

2008-04-04 20:46:10


LOL!! Is dat so??? XP Thanx 4 the comment Wolfy-kun^-^

2008-02-22 15:09:10


ive wrote more deperessing ones^^

2008-02-22 14:43:08


^-^ U're welcome Lala-chan! I'm glad u like it.

2008-02-22 08:45:44


Thats really deep, it makes me feel sad how much it can hurt you, but I hope it goes away. Thanks for uploading this Neneo-sama

2008-02-22 08:28:21


^-^ Thanx Pi-chan and Kryo-kun!

2008-02-20 15:46:41


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