ART + LIFE
Loneliness
Alone
Sitting in the dark without a spark
to light my way
It welcomes all
I can feel it surrounding me
closer and closer it comes
Its starting to suffocate me
I feel like its.......
crushing my heart
All the while still yearning
to feel the warmth purity of the light
Feeling left out, I reach my hand out
Waiting, wanting, wishing......
for someone to pull me out
Thinking: Will anyone ever come for me?
^-^ YAY! My fourth poem!! I have so much fun writing them :D Ok, I know my poems have been.........grim>.> One day (not soon) I'll TRY to write a happier poem^-^ Please comment and if you like it pop/clip also!
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LOL! Than Death-kun^-^
NENEKOHANA
2008-04-25 19:48:54
someone might come if you keep hopeing
DEATH82
2008-04-07 17:53:40
^-^ Thanx Pi-chan and I'm sure some1 will come 4 u! Uhh......*turns on flashlight* Nope^-^ I guess I'm just silly, Onee-chan! XP
NENEKOHANA
2008-03-01 14:41:01
did the batteries die?
REDPANDA
2008-03-01 14:31:55
very good!!!^-^ i love it!that's a good question, i ask my self that a lot.
VAMPIREPRIESTESS7
2008-03-01 14:25:41
O.O..............good question.............>.>
NENEKOHANA
2008-03-01 13:53:34
then why cant u use it? XD
REDPANDA
2008-03-01 13:45:07
Oh, srry XP Yes, I do have a flaslight Onee-chan^-^ Sounds like a dead slience Wolfy-kun......^-^ Thanx 4 the comment!
NENEKOHANA
2008-03-01 12:33:42
lonelyness is that of dark walls, only propusis to crash all in side, darkness lines the razor edges that is thonly escape, blood runs red, dripping, driping, for ever dripping as the crow speaks for never more
WOLFRIDER
2008-03-01 12:14:25
that dose not ansure my qusestion.
REDPANDA
2008-02-29 17:16:03
^-^ Thanx Dani-kun!
NENEKOHANA
2008-02-28 12:57:17
thats pretty good ^_^
DANIEL953
2008-02-28 12:52:30
OMG!! Dat was beautiful Suka-kun! U REALLY should post poems! ^-^ Thanx 4 the comment!
NENEKOHANA
2008-02-27 12:47:02
i am your fire, i am your light i only can bring into this world filled with delight for my hope and dreams lies only where the light touches the ground and even the air take me hand let us take flight forever more shall we stay in the light!
RITSUKALOVER77
2008-02-27 12:41:36
LMBO!! XD Thanx Onee-chan!^-^
NENEKOHANA
2008-02-27 07:55:22