Leslie time to get up sweetie or you’ll be late for school and we have something very important to tell you. Yes mother I’m up. Leslie hurries and changes from her pj’s and changes into her school uniform. She goes down stairs and sees both of her parents sitting at the dinning room table and tells her to sit down. Her mother says, “Leslie there’s something very important that we need to tell you, you’re adopted. Up until this moment she knew nothing about being in the alley and anything about but at this very second every thing she thought she knew wasn’t
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i like it short yet simple, aesome job its fine the way it is.
SAKUYA156
2008-06-22 00:13:53
This is pretty cool so far, I like it too!
KHEARTS
2008-04-18 17:54:08
pretty cool! I agree with Claudia, but I'm still wondering what's going to happen next!
NYX7MEDIC
2008-03-05 11:10:24
wow i wonder what will happen next you should keep at it
JAFA19
2008-02-14 20:16:03
sorry it's more when i write it on paper
NINJAGIRL
2008-02-14 16:55:10
i agree with Claudia... but i think it has a lot of potential! message me when theres more, kayy??^_^
VASHLOVER6
2008-02-09 22:37:17
ok, good, not to nagg or anything, can you make it longer and punctuation please?thanks!
CLAUDIA23
2008-02-09 20:17:09
cool!
DWIN
2008-02-09 15:17:42