Its Not Sposed to work like that way Ch1
Its Not Supposed to Work Like This…… *Past* You and your mother were running fast away from the enemy who wanted your power. Your mother ran with you, at only 5 years old, until she hid you in a tree bank and she fought off until you heard a…..*SPLAT!..Thud. ”Where is that brat? We need to find her or master will have our head..” Someone said. You hid there for three days until a lady in a kimono found you and took you home. She would soon become your stepmother. “Hello child. What is your name?” “Evangeline M *Present Day, 10 years later* You!!! “But why Mom?” Evangeline whined. “Why do we have to move for the 6th time?” Evangeline, unaware to her knowledge, was the tool to great power in her clan. She had pale skin and Patriatian features, Long, curly brown hair and also a semi Goth girl. She wore a short black point tipped skirt with high black and white socks, Black boots and a skull tee shirt. “We have to for…issues.” Her Stepmother said. “Whatever.” Eva said turning up her Ipod to listen to her favorite band. Arriving in Kohona in the Black Cadillac.One of their cars was already there, The 300 White Chrysler “Evangeline meet Saskue and his friend Kiba. They‘re our neighbors helping us move in" Said Karin. Evangeline looked up at the two on the stairs and then back to her mom. "Mom where is my room? I want to put my stuff away." Said Eva acting as if they weren’t there. "Upstairs. Second to last door on the left." Her mom told her. Eva nodded her understanding and started walking towards the stairs when Akira stopped her. "Evangeline, do you have anything else that needs to be taken upstairs?" He asked. Evangeline turned her head to look at him and responded by saying "Yeah. I’ve got some more boxes in the car." He nodded and reached for the doorknob to the front door when Eva snapped at him and said, "I can do it myself. I don’t need your help." She finished saying with a slightly agitated tone in her voice then began walking up the stairs and past Shino and Kiba to her new room. As she was making her way to her room Saskue muttered "What a b****." Under his breath, but not a second after he said that they heard "I HEARD THAT BAKA!!!" and then a door slam. They all stood there for a moment before Naruto looked at Saskue and snickered. Saskue muttered a ‘Shut up.’ Under his breath. Karin sighed then looked at them and said, "You might want to watch out. She already has a short temper and this situation isn’t helping." They kind of gave her a look that said ‘No Duh’ then headed out the front door while Karin walked into the kitchen. “Well she seems like a w****.” Naruto said. Then, Evangeline stomped downstairs to kill Naruto. She has wicked hearing abilities.”OH,
HELL
NO! I know you didn’t just insult Me” She screamed
CENSORS! .And due to violence we cannot show this material to small children. Later that night…. Evangeline was thinking about the upcoming festival that was happening in Kohona in a few weeks. Who was she gonna take or would she even go? She thought of crazy combinations to go with then….she thought what if she went with Saskue? ……..Well I really don’t know what he looks like but-Shut up Eva-chan! You hate him….don’t you? Well there’s no way he feels the same way……NO WAY! *At Saskue’s house* *Thinking*That new girl is so b****y…..Kind of like Sakura but prettier Well,well,well.So. Starting to have doubts aren’t we? Next Day: It was Saturday and their day off so Eva,Sakura, and Ino went shopping and they went into a dress shop to get dresses for going clubbin. Hinata picked a lavender strap dress that fell near her knees‘-what d-do you think Eva-chan?” Hinata said. “It looks great on you!” Evangeline said. Sakura and Ino fought over one dress saying ‘I found it first!’ Evangeline got a very short gold wrinkle strapless, like the one Beyonce wore at the end of her video ‘Freakum Dress‘. She looked absolutely gorgeous ,Long, Curly red hair flying in the wind. She didn’t feel like taking it off, so she went outside in it. And at that moment, Kiba Saskue, Shikamaru and Naruto walked around the corner.
Saskue’s mouth was wide open, but it nearly fell off. The same was with the other guys .Naruto was looking at Hinata, Shikamaru was looking at Ino, And Kiba looking at Sakura. Saskue was calm on the outside but was freaking out on the inside with thoughts running through his head. “Wow she looks like she‘s a model….Wait! She hates me though. There’s no way she likes me… Hey what makes myself think I like her at all?!
By the time he snapped back to reality she had already ‘cat walked’ herself and her posse around the corner. It was like they hadn’t seen them at all.(It’s the oldest girl trick in the book to get a guy to like you! IGNORE ‘EM!) Sunday: Eva was walking to Ichiraku’s for ramen when Saskue called up to you and smiled.”Hey, Evangeline. Do you want to go get Ice Cream with me?”*Saskue think I’ll try to ask her out today. What? Uchiha Saskue, Emo Kid, And Avenger Dude was actually asking me to go somewhere with him AND smiling? This is a Kodak moment. When they both got to there you ordered your flavors. At
The ice cream counter: “I want vanilla, plain.”Saskue "I want vanilla, no chocolate... no strawberry! No, wait... um, peppermint, er, no WATERMELON-PECAN DELUXE!!!"(RANDOM-NONEXISTENT-FLAVOR) Evangeline says.Saskue groans. ‘She so goofy but it’s kinda….cute.’ Saskue thought. He was smirking at this and Eva noticed.” What’s so funny?” Evangeline said with a frown. “It’s just you’re so goofy,” Saskue said. ”just like Naruto.” “Don’t compare me to Naruto.” She said, growing angrier by the second but Saskue was still joking. “I mean you are a klutz and-”He was cut off by Eva shoving her ice cream in his face and storming away. He stood there shocked and dumbfounded. The guy behind the counter snickered. “Shut up!!”Saskue growled.
*Eva’s POV*
Thinking: That jerk! Having the nerve to insult me. I’m a Queen and I deserve to be treated with the respect! And to think I was gonna ask him to the Cherry blossom festival! Black Wings started to form and tore threw her shirt. Okay cool down Eva! You don’t want it coming out of you again. Then she walked around the corner to go and change her clothes. *Saskue’s POV* *Thinking*Damn! I messed up this time!!!…. I was gonna ask her to the Cherry Blossom Festival in a few weeks. Okay DONE! So wat will happen? What is IT? Who will ask out who? What is the force that is trying to get Eva’s power’s?
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can you send me the pic of the girl in the begining please and make it big cause i want to try adn draw her, thanks
CLAUDIA23
2008-03-01 16:18:42
thats much better!!!
CLAUDIA23
2008-02-29 18:01:21