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Gothic Love Letter

                                            Together in Death

 

                                Seeing the moon on your face

 

                             It makes my blood begin too race

 

                                  I suddenly pull out my knife

 

                                Slowly I begin to end your life

 

                              Feeling the blood begin too pour      

 

                                  My hand begins to feel sore

 

                           Watching as your eyes look in disbelief

 

                                      You are my final relief

 

                                   Seeing how you begin to fade

 

                                    I find myself licking the blade

 

                                         Getting on my knees

 

                                     Suddenly I whisper please

 

                              Feeling you grab the blade in your hand

 

                                        Knowing you can barely stand

 

                                  I feel the cold blade pierce my heart  

 

                                    Now I know we'll never be apart

 

                      Laying in your arms as we breath our last breath  

 

                            Knowing well be together forever in death         

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this is definitly (sp?) better than my poems ^___^ you did an amazing job!!! *gives stamp of 110% approval for gothness, ect*

2008-07-07 14:18:12


awww..... thats soo freaggen sweet *puppy eyes*

2008-05-05 06:30:13


beautifully expressed and written...

2008-02-18 16:23:13


better than my poem

2008-02-15 20:39:11


wow.... that is awesome

2008-02-09 13:59:16


wow i love that, that two people love each other that they want to betogther forever even through death

2008-01-14 14:02:04


wow thats really INTENSE i absolutely love it.

2008-01-03 20:03:05


I love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

2008-01-02 10:59:36


I love this line the most: "I find myself licking the blade." It was good and the ending was pretty sweet.

2008-01-01 18:46:34


thats crazi deep

2008-01-01 16:16:18


Wow its really good

2008-01-01 13:39:56


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