Together in Death
Seeing the moon on your face
It makes my blood begin too race
I suddenly pull out my knife
Slowly I begin to end your life
Feeling the blood begin too pour
My hand begins to feel sore
Watching as your eyes look in disbelief
You are my final relief
Seeing how you begin to fade
I find myself licking the blade
Getting on my knees
Suddenly I whisper please
Feeling you grab the blade in your hand
Knowing you can barely stand
I feel the cold blade pierce my heart
Now I know we'll never be apart
Laying in your arms as we breath our last breath
Knowing well be together forever in death
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this is definitly (sp?) better than my poems ^___^ you did an amazing job!!! *gives stamp of 110% approval for gothness, ect*
THEIFGODDESS
2008-07-07 14:18:12
awww..... thats soo freaggen sweet *puppy eyes*
WONDERINGMIND09
2008-05-05 06:30:13
beautifully expressed and written...
VAMPYRA777
2008-02-18 16:23:13
better than my poem
MEGARYAN
2008-02-15 20:39:11
wow.... that is awesome
PUNKGIRL1357
2008-02-09 13:59:16
wow i love that, that two people love each other that they want to betogther forever even through death
DARKPRINCESS28
2008-01-14 14:02:04
wow thats really INTENSE i absolutely love it.
PASSIONATEEMO
2008-01-03 20:03:05
I love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DARKENDLIFE
2008-01-02 10:59:36
I love this line the most: "I find myself licking the blade." It was good and the ending was pretty sweet.
LIVIDLIES
2008-01-01 18:46:34
thats crazi deep
LOVE132
2008-01-01 16:16:18
Wow its really good
LUCIFER02
2008-01-01 13:39:56