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Guardians of Light and Darkness Chap. 1

Amber's side

"Its time amber. Once again the time has come to fufill the prophecy!" my mentor Saphhira told me.

" Buts he's a human Saph!! How can i train him in a week?? u've taken 10 YEARS on me!!!" I complained.

"Tranform into your human self now Am goodluck your land is depending on you!" And she just dissapeared.

"human tranformation!" I chanted using my ring/staff. I find myself on a beach with a dark haired tanned human. I muttered to myself "Could he be it?"

"Hello there, a pretty lady like you shouldnt b walking around alone at nite." wow he startled me i thought i was fast!

"Hi to you too." wahhh how should i explain this??!??!? Then suddenly a dark demon appeared out of no where!

"ALREADY?? but its not time yet!!! Ring transformation!" my staff appeared "Sun and Moon Defence!!" I big shield surrounded us "We don't have much time left!!!!!"

"whats goin on??" He asked

"I cant tell you now. Just stand behind me!" I let the shield loose and found out that there were not 1 but 200,000 creature i had to fight. "Lightlning ray!" Yes i got out 10 of them. But they kept mulitplying.

"I cant fight them alone!!" I transported us into Shamadon. *Btw i nvr got your name. Mines'd amber and as soon as we calm down i'll explain everything." He was grinning.

"Well If i get to fight i cant wait!" He laughs. He has beautiful pearly white teeth Omg im not supposed to b thinking like this!! I join back into his conversation "oh and my name's andrew" he laughs again.

"Im amber and well might as well say Welcome Home!"

" Home??!?!? What do you mean!?!?!?"

Ok this is the end for now please rate and comment if you liked it and what i can do to improve it! Thanks to everyone who commented and helped making my fiction better! Luv u!


Hey everyone this is just a new story im trying out if u like it please rate and comment so i can continue this story! Thanks!!

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Tags: Romance,love,light,darkness  Added 2007-10-27 06:34:38
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Sorry about the l8 work but im gonna work on my fiction by the send of this week 4 sure

2007-11-14 17:33:35


ASAP!!! Maybe by the end of this week most likely

2007-10-29 19:26:13


So when r u going to post more of this story?

2007-10-29 06:02:55


Thx soo much! lol i kno i think im gonna fail english! Im a crappy speller! anyways thanks for the support! and the next one should b out soon!

2007-10-27 09:17:08


Ooh this is good, I like it...WHEN'S THE NEXT ONE COMING?! P.S. WATCH YOUR SPELLING MISTAKES, other then that, prr-fect! -Amaya Hotaru

2007-10-27 08:41:05


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