Amber's side
"Its time amber. Once again the time has come to fufill the prophecy!" my mentor Saphhira told me.
" Buts he's a human Saph!! How can i train him in a week?? u've taken 10 YEARS on me!!!" I complained.
"Tranform into your human self now Am goodluck your land is depending on you!" And she just dissapeared.
"human tranformation!" I chanted using my ring/staff. I find myself on a beach with a dark haired tanned human. I muttered to myself "Could he be it?"
"Hello there, a pretty lady like you shouldnt b walking around alone at nite." wow he startled me i thought i was fast!
"Hi to you too." wahhh how should i explain this??!??!? Then suddenly a dark demon appeared out of no where!
"ALREADY?? but its not time yet!!! Ring transformation!" my staff appeared "Sun and Moon Defence!!" I big shield surrounded us "We don't have much time left!!!!!"
"whats goin on??" He asked
"I cant tell you now. Just stand behind me!" I let the shield loose and found out that there were not 1 but 200,000 creature i had to fight. "Lightlning ray!" Yes i got out 10 of them. But they kept mulitplying.
"I cant fight them alone!!" I transported us into Shamadon. *Btw i nvr got your name. Mines'd amber and as soon as we calm down i'll explain everything." He was grinning.
"Well If i get to fight i cant wait!" He laughs. He has beautiful pearly white teeth Omg im not supposed to b thinking like this!! I join back into his conversation "oh and my name's andrew" he laughs again.
"Im amber and well might as well say Welcome Home!"
" Home??!?!? What do you mean!?!?!?"
Ok this is the end for now please rate and comment if you liked it and what i can do to improve it! Thanks to everyone who commented and helped making my fiction better! Luv u!
Hey everyone this is just a new story im trying out if u like it please rate and comment so i can continue this story! Thanks!!
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Sorry about the l8 work but im gonna work on my fiction by the send of this week 4 sure
PRINCESSOFMANGA
2007-11-14 17:33:35
ASAP!!! Maybe by the end of this week most likely
PRINCESSOFMANGA
2007-10-29 19:26:13
So when r u going to post more of this story?
BLUEEYES
2007-10-29 06:02:55
Thx soo much! lol i kno i think im gonna fail english! Im a crappy speller! anyways thanks for the support! and the next one should b out soon!
PRINCESSOFMANGA
2007-10-27 09:17:08
Ooh this is good, I like it...WHEN'S THE NEXT ONE COMING?! P.S. WATCH YOUR SPELLING MISTAKES, other then that, prr-fect! -Amaya Hotaru
BUTTERFLYHINA
2007-10-27 08:41:05