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out of 202 views only 3 comments, if yall dont comment{idont care if there bad} i will not up date, and i will take this down, so PLEASE read AND comment.

Prologue

A holing wind roars in my ears as I follow the man that said he would take me to my brother. The man had to bend down not to be hit by branches, but a little girl at the age of eight does not have to. I held tight to my stuffed bunny as we climbed a hill. The mans’ big black coat was caught on branches countless times, and his hat fell off constantly. I wish the man would at least tell me his name. It feels weird following a stranger, but he knew brother’s middle name and no one knew that.

I looked up, no more trees? Brother said the forest only had one place were there were no tree. “There is one place I love to go”, he would whisper in my ear at bedtime “It is a special place were all dreams come true and all unhappiness disappears, I will take you there when you’re old enough”, he would promise “it is magical but very dangerous”, he would warn. Maybe this is his way of telling me I was old enough.

The wind was picking up; I wonder why he did not do this yesterday when it was sunny? I soon realized that I was not looking at trees but ocean. It was a cliff, now I know why it was dangerous; if I had come when I was younger, I might have just run up to the edge and fallen off.

I look around, and I did not see brother. I look at the man and I ask him, “Where is Brother, you said he was here.” He looked at me and, I do not know what it was in the smile but it felt like my legs were faltering, I could not breath, then he looked away, I relaxed, out to the sea and almost whispered “He is in the ocean, would like to see him?” shakily I went over to the man. I looked over the edge of the cliff, my breathing stopped. It was beautiful, the waves lapped at the rocks, like hands reaching for air then falling back in to the ocean, the birds flew by ,called out in harmony, as the sun set with the with wind blowing and the clouds over head it really was a magical place as brother had said. However, the magic of the place is not what made my breathing stop, lying on the rocks with red water all around him, was my brother. I looked at the man, and started to shake harder. I had never felt so much anger ,so much pain, so much hate and…so … much…fear. He still wore the smile that could hypnotize, the smile that could calm any one, the smile that could defeat, and the smile that could kill.

As I looked at him, he moved his hand, and I was in a downward dive for the rocks, for my brother. I closed my eyes and hit the water. I was alive. The water was so cold; it was like thousands of tiny knives piercing my skin. The current was strong, and as I gulped in the water, I started to cried for it had the taste of blood. My limbs grew heavy as the wind picked up. The last thing I saw was that smile and something I had not noticed before. HIS EYES. black as coal, just like his heart. Then it went black. That was the day my memories were lost and the day I started my life as, a Wild Girl.

i am planning to get ratings here and see if my book is good enough to sell published.it is taking me forever to wright this book cause of school, friends, and my every day life{which sucks just so you know}. but i have the prologue done and PART of the first chapter, dont try to copy and say it is yours, i have this at home and i have it known by the goverment as mine, and on that foreboding note, i hope you enjoy.