ART + LIFE
the light in the darkness
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In my cell of despair
I try to escape, but the guards of popularity
Just push me back
A few reach in, but not far enough to grab the hand I reach out with
I know no words like love and kindness
Just hate and torture
I jump out only to be pushed back in
Ignored, no love, no friend,
Nothing to show anyone cares
Difference has made society shun me
My soul devoured and destroyed
Only one light shines on me now a strand of hope in hopeless
The only light in DARKNESS
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i love this one....i really do....you did a great job...*pop*
VAMPIREKNIGHTFREK
2008-07-12 22:24:10
i like it, especially "one light shines on my now a strand of hope in hopeless" although if i could give any advice it would be to work on spacing, so that the readers know when to pause for a second ooh and i like "guards of popularity" the image it sends is great
KIWILOVER
2008-07-11 13:56:15
wow. thats deep. nice. i like it. ^_^ i kind of wrote a poem like that. but its different. its called "My Savior" its in my fiction.
CRAZYGREYWOLFGIRL
2008-07-11 12:00:48