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no more pain or blood
I feel pain
Why do i do this
I say it is to escape the pain
However, it just causes more
The blood stops
The pain is still there
The mark is still there
What is the point of this
After it is over, i still feel pain
No more
I will stop this pain
Soon the other pain will leave
Loneliness
I choose to be alone
I will speak out now
Sadness
I choose to look at the bad things
It is time to be optimistic
I will change the things that cause me pain
I will start with the knife
The blood
And the mark
They will now disappear
NEVER to come back to me
♥☺☻♥☻☺♥
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Oo... I am a slit rist emo 0.0 lol... good..
hmm... as ive said, needs more substance, its like all the other poems ive read.
....that is a wonderful poem.....*pop*
Gret poem. I used to have that did it 4 a while but then she stopped so i know how hard it is. *pop*
awesome poem you did a awesome job on it ^^
great poem, i especially love the format idk if you ment to do this, but it looks like a winding path and that really fits the mood of the poem, its perfect
wow. my friend was like 4 a while. i knocked sum sence into her wen she told me. i dont think iv ever yelled at her as much as i did that day. neway im glad ur friend stopped ^_^
Yeeeaaaahhhh!! XD You go girl!!!
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i am righting this for one of my best friends, she was slit risk emo for a while cause....well... her life sucks....and ya...she is stopping...and...and....and...hope you like it