worthless tears
My tears are pointless
You are gone
Nothing will change that
But why did you have to go
You hugged me then walked away
Your arms left imprints on me
Your warmth will always be with me
I will never forget you
Maybe that is why I cry these
Worthless tears
I fell in your blood
My tears mixed with it
I was the only person that is alive
That saw your last expression
It was that of remorse and passion
Because the last thing you saw
Was my tear streaked face
Maybe one day you will see my smile again
But until then
Will you always know
How much I love you
And how much your good-byes scars my life
Maybe since you would no longer
Be in my life
That is why heaven took you in
So long and farewell to my beloved David
I am righting this on the day of my EX-boyfriends funeral. He died after breaking up with me{in a car crash. the driver was drunk and ran him over} ,and I will never stop loving him even after I am married. And this I swear.{his name is not david}......ow after you read this go to my fiction and read it was not my time....it is the one with the crying angel....thank you *bow*...
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um....i wright about my life so at the moment...no i can not stop making sad poems....ow and past and present tense is mixed up because all trough the
REN14LOVE
2008-08-17 17:06:45
omg that is so sad. your poem skills are great but can you stop making sad poems.
FIRESTARSFAN
2008-07-27 07:40:44
past and present tense need to be remembered, but beautifully sad... he will be gratefull, where ever he is now for you. just dont be caught in the web of the past, for its a horrible curse to be rid of. he says he has forgiven you, be happy now
TWILIGHTSTAR12
2008-07-13 09:51:40
...that's just awful.....i'm so sorry to hear that...must be hard........the poem is wonderful though.....great job...*pop*
VAMPIREKNIGHTFREK
2008-07-12 22:50:27
oh I'm sorry... that really sucks... sorry if that didn't sound sincere, but it is... I can't imagine what it'd be like to lose someone that close...
OKYSHO
2008-07-12 20:34:05
great poem its amazingly written i loved it ^^
SWEETLY92
2008-07-12 19:34:15
excellent poem. the choice of words is excellent and it was worth reading.
ADMIRALDEWEYNARUTO
2008-07-12 18:48:59
i'm so sorry, that has to be extremly hard...
KIWILOVER
2008-07-11 13:58:28
wow. im so srry. i will never understand y life is so crule...
CRAZYGREYWOLFGIRL
2008-07-11 12:28:03
Oh, I am so sorry...
CHIBIYOSHINO
2008-05-09 12:50:47