ART + LIFE
When You Wake Up
Every thing is different when you wake up
You know no one
You have no control over what happens
When you wake up
Life is not a dream
When you wake
There is pain
When you wake up
You can not stop the sorrow
Inflicted on you and others
When you wake up
There is nothing but a clear mind
You can not hide from the true
When you wake up darkness is light
And light is darkness
When you wake up
You can not dream
You can not dream of a better world
A world were there is no death
No pain, no reality
When you wake up
You can love
You can feel
When you wake up
you can truly be happy
this only a tast so please be patiant for more
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MASK
2008-07-12 21:25:34
Kyaaaa......i loved it. I like the part where is says"When you wake up darkness is light and light is darkness" it started out sad but in the end it gives you a touch of happyness. *pop*
SAYA01
2008-07-12 21:11:22
it's cute and true but you should have used the word truth in "You can not hide from the true"it should be "You can not hide from the truth"
LETSGO
2008-07-12 20:44:13
*blush* ya i dont like ending sadly enless that is what i am going 4
REN14LOVE
2008-05-29 08:31:13
kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!..i loved it!..the part that you say that you cant dream when you weak up, but eventhough started so sadly realistic you ended it with a touch of hope!
DAYNATOMODASHI
2008-05-27 20:26:05
but i do like your way to. and true it can sound like that, and maby it should sound like that
REN14LOVE
2008-04-20 16:30:57
ACTUALLY what i was trying to say is that when you are dreaming or asleep you are happy. and manny people think if they staid in there dreams they would be happy. not having to face the world. but when you sleep you can not enjoy life to its fullest. but you can see it as you want, a poem a picyure , and countless other things can be seen in diferent ways by countless people. just read it and see what you see.
REN14LOVE
2008-04-20 16:30:01
in other words stop dreaming people and face reality. It's better than you think. ^_^ I like it. Good job!
KANASHA
2008-04-16 19:45:49
Good job! Keep writing!!!
QUAKEYJASE
2008-04-02 02:38:00