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Maro chapter 3 NEW
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You did a good job when her sister was on her trying to wake her up. Your art is starting to improve. The eyes could use some work but you're still learning so there's no rush ^^ Hope to see the next chapter!
That's so cute! ~^w^~
tnx guyz~
Love it still!! keep me with the up-dates!!
like it
i love it woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow u r talented *pop* if i can pop more than once i would've pop it a hundred time
i really like it and your drawings are really good too! *POP*
i love the beginning of the manga, as i said before you did well with the deep space of rooms and peoples figures....you do know how to keep the eye of the reader focus on what it is important, good joB!!!!
Yeah, the ending was a prequel to chapter IV. The woman was killed by the dog things. But that’s really all I wanted to be understood. The last panel was one dog that stayed behind eating her. ^_^ I’m trying to make the story a little bit confusing and mysterious, but I’m afraid it might be too much sometimes. I’m glad you like it though! I like your stuff a lot too! You’re definitely going in a good direction wit it!! Um, I’m not the best at feed back but I’ll try!! I’ve been critiqued by a few editors at Tokyopop, so I’ll try to base my feedback to you on what they said to me. ^_^ I definitely like your style, and the page layouts are really good, the backgrounds are good too, really good, but I think you could do them a bit more often (they’re really big on backgrounds at TP). You’re good at backgrounds so don’t be afraid of them!! I really like how you look like your experimenting a bit with it, ya know, trying it in different directions, that’s the best way to learn. But they’d probably say the shading style isn’t consistent enough. Like, it kinda changes from pg 3 to 4 and then from pg 6 to 7. Does that make sense? The way your characters interact with each other is really believable which is awesome! ‘Cause that’s not easy. ^_^ It looks like you improved a lot from beginning to end, so just keep doing it, and you’ll have something totally awesome!
OMIGOD!! That's such a good story!! LOVE IT!!!! ^^ *SUPER POP*
nice, still love the art
chia! duded! nice job!! i cant w8 till ur manga gets published!! or.. r u going to get it published??? but still....nice job!! xD
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hey hey peepz..the other player wouldn't let me add in all my pagez..so i'm trying to post it again...PLZ comment and POP IF U LIKE IT!!!!!