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My Pain

beneath a tree

I lie all day

trying to hard

to hide my pain

wishing on all the clouds above

thinking of all those I thought I loved

 

under the stars

I weep and cry

hoping the darkness

hides my shame

hugging the grass to my cold chest

praying that this won't cease to last

 

near the stream

I go to vent

dreaming for all

my pain to end

then looking at all my cuts below

I see my tear-stained face fail to glow

 

as morning comes

I try to hide

moping and crying

until I die

no one comes to help me about

I'm stuck in this world, with no way out


yupo, another poem- this one i wrote while it was raining....but it was almost always raining... Remember: if anyone wants information of the Flood of '08, Cedar Rapids, or how to help teh victims, please let me now.

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Tags: saddepressedcryweep  Added 2008-07-05 11:51:31
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thats pretty good. needs more work into it. but that's me

2008-07-06 12:52:03


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