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Once upon a time there lived a boy named Tyrell Smith. He lived in Nagasaki,Japan. He was 19 years old and goes to Silver Moon University. And little did he know he was about to get to know one special girl. One day Tyrell was on his way to school, when he saw a girl having a hard time crossing the road. Uh.... excuse me are you having trouble crossing the road? asked Tyrell. Yes, I am I don't know when to cross. Said the Girl. When I run across you follow, ok? explained Tyrell. Ok. responded the girl. Ready...set....go!!! said Tyrell as he and the mysterious girl raced acrossed the street. AAAAAHHHH!!!! yelled he girl as she tripped to the ground. Oh crap!!! yelled tyrell as he dashed back to save her. Tyrell quickly picked her up and dashed back to the other side. With her in Tyrell's arms she blushed a bit then said thank you in a quite voice. As Tyrell put her down he asked whats your name? Its Chloe......Chloe Muyo. she said studdering. Well nice to meet you I'm Tyrell Smith. Well later I got to ge to class. said Tyrell as he jetted to the university. Oh....oh thank you!!! yelled Chloe as she waved to him. Well I better be off to school too. said Chloe as she ran towards the university. Later that day during free period Tyrell was just walking around when he heard a scream AAAAHHH!!! Let me go!!!! cried a familar voice. Tyrell ran towards the side of a class and saw some of his Senpai's (upperclassmen in english) messing with Chloe. Hey you guys leave her alone!! demanded Tyrell. Oh come on Ty-man you know want this. said one of his senpai's yes I do but not like this!!! he yelled as he stood in his tiger stance.
made by:
shadowblade9216, aka,Ryo-Senpai
P.S. please leave your comments about my story. and please tell me if you want me to keep posting my stories. Thank yo for your time
hey nice story i liked it =] and i like the name of the university (its cool)
its really nice^^ all though it does need a spell check, and put more details too it^^
its good, it jumps around alot, but good try using spellcheck ok ^_^!
this is really good.
This sounds good!!!!!!
i like your story it's pretty awsome
hey great story!:D *pop*^^
awsome
pretty cool
its good a bit fast paced but its good all around
its really good make sure to post other parts on the clan
YES I LOVEED IT YOU SHOULD KEEP WRITEING STORY'S
it is cool i like it personaly but u do have some typos but they arent that bad but the storyline in my opinion is very good you should expand on this
its good u should write more of it ^.^
good job! do write more~! ^^
Hello I just want to see how much my storie would get around