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Chapter1 Encounter (part 1)

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hey nice story i liked it =] and i like the name of the university (its cool)

08:06 PM, 06.20.2008


its really nice^^ all though it does need a spell check, and put more details too it^^

07:29 PM, 05.28.2008


its good, it jumps around alot, but good try using spellcheck ok ^_^!

06:00 AM, 04.28.2008


this is really good.

10:55 AM, 04.27.2008


This sounds good!!!!!!

06:59 PM, 04.26.2008


i like your story it's pretty awsome

06:19 PM, 04.26.2008


hey great story!:D *pop*^^

06:19 PM, 04.26.2008


awsome

08:27 AM, 04.26.2008


pretty cool

08:04 AM, 04.26.2008


its good a bit fast paced but its good all around

05:04 AM, 04.23.2008


its really good make sure to post other parts on the clan

10:22 AM, 04.21.2008


YES I LOVEED IT YOU SHOULD KEEP WRITEING STORY'S

09:57 AM, 04.21.2008


it is cool i like it personaly but u do have some typos but they arent that bad but the storyline in my opinion is very good you should expand on this

07:27 PM, 04.20.2008


its good u should write more of it ^.^

02:42 PM, 04.20.2008


good job! do write more~! ^^

10:39 PM, 04.18.2008


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