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its really nice^^ all though it does need a spell check, and put more details too it^^
its good, it jumps around alot, but good try using spellcheck ok ^_^!
this is really good.
This sounds good!!!!!!
i like your story it's pretty awsome
hey great story!:D *pop*^^
awsome
pretty cool
its good a bit fast paced but its good all around
its really good make sure to post other parts on the clan
YES I LOVEED IT YOU SHOULD KEEP WRITEING STORY'S
it is cool i like it personaly but u do have some typos but they arent that bad but the storyline in my opinion is very good you should expand on this
its good u should write more of it ^.^
good job! do write more~! ^^
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hey nice story i liked it =] and i like the name of the university (its cool)
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08:06 PM, 06.20.2008