VIEWS TODAY: 3
VIEWS TOTAL: 122
POPS: 2
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COMMENTS: 17
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ADDED: 04.21.2008
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Continuing from last time:
Yes I do want that, but not in that way!!!! yelled Tyrelas he stood in his tiger stance. Little boy you don't know who your messing with!!!yelled another senpai as the three of them sourronded Tyrell. Chloe....thought Tyrell to himself as he saw the tears roll from her eye. HHHAAAAAA!!!!!!!! yelled the senpai's as they charged in at Tyrell. Hiyaaaaa!!!!!!! yelled Tyrell as he attack the senpai's. After Tyrell was done fighting the senpai's he walked over to Chloe. Hey....you ok? asked Tyrell. Sniff...sniff.....yeah. Here dry your tears with this. said Tyrell as he handded Chloe his hankerchef. Thanks.....sniff...cried Chloe. It's no problem...are you hurt? asked Tyrell. Yeah my leg...when one of them hit my leg it might have spranged it. explained Chloe. Get on....said Tyrell as he kneeled down. Huh? what....are you doing? asked Chloe. Well you sprainged so I was gonna carry you to the clinic. explained Tyrell. Ok.....said Chloe blushing as she got on his back. We'll be there in a minute. said Tyrell as he started walking. Why? Whyis my heart beating so hard? Breath....slow down heart!!! thought Chloe to herself. Hey Chloe hang on it's just ahead. reassured Tyrell. ok...thank you. she said. But before they got to the clinic, other senpai's in Tyrells class showed up. Your gonna pay!!! yelled one of the senpai's.
your doing a really good job.
i liked it again great job
hey, another job well done.^^*pop*xP
verry nice ryo sempai im going to read part three of the story
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awsome keep it up
Great job
thats good u should keep it up
your story is soooooooooo unoriginal!!! i love it!!! holla!!! say what it about anyway!
nice~ keep your good work up kay! ^^
vert nice keep it up
You're a gr8 writer!
could of added a bit more to the fighting scene.try to do it in the next one ok.it was good.
sorry so short didn't have time