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Chapter1 Encounter (part 2)

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Chapter1 Encounter (part 2)

Continuing from last time:

Yes I do want that, but not in that way!!!! yelled Tyrelas he stood in his tiger stance.  Little boy you don't know who your messing with!!!yelled another senpai as the three of them sourronded Tyrell. Chloe....thought Tyrell to himself as he saw the tears roll from her eye. HHHAAAAAA!!!!!!!! yelled the senpai's as they charged in at Tyrell. Hiyaaaaa!!!!!!! yelled Tyrell as he attack the senpai's. After Tyrell was done fighting the senpai's he walked over to Chloe. Hey....you ok? asked Tyrell. Sniff...sniff.....yeah. Here dry your tears with this. said Tyrell as he handded Chloe his hankerchef. Thanks.....sniff...cried Chloe. It's no problem...are you hurt? asked Tyrell. Yeah my leg...when one of them hit my leg it might have spranged it. explained Chloe. Get on....said Tyrell as he kneeled down. Huh? what....are you doing? asked Chloe. Well you sprainged so I was gonna carry you to the clinic. explained Tyrell. Ok.....said Chloe blushing as she got on his back. We'll be there in a minute. said Tyrell as he started walking. Why? Whyis my heart beating so hard? Breath....slow down heart!!! thought Chloe to herself. Hey Chloe hang on it's just ahead. reassured Tyrell. ok...thank you. she said. But before they got to the clinic, other senpai's in Tyrells class showed up. Your gonna pay!!! yelled one of the senpai's.


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sorry so short didn't have time

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your doing a really good job.

04.27.2008 10:57 AM


i liked it again great job

04.26.2008 06:29 PM


hey, another job well done.^^*pop*xP

04.26.2008 06:21 PM


verry nice ryo sempai im going to read part three of the story

04.26.2008 01:23 PM


cool

04.26.2008 08:43 AM


cool

04.26.2008 08:43 AM


cool

04.26.2008 08:43 AM


awsome keep it up

04.26.2008 08:23 AM


Great job

04.25.2008 06:28 PM


thats good u should keep it up

04.25.2008 03:59 PM


your story is soooooooooo unoriginal!!! i love it!!! holla!!! say what it about anyway!

04.25.2008 07:12 AM


nice~ keep your good work up kay! ^^

04.24.2008 08:31 PM


vert nice keep it up

04.24.2008 10:42 AM


You're a gr8 writer!

04.23.2008 06:52 PM


could of added a bit more to the fighting scene.try to do it in the next one ok.it was good.

04.23.2008 05:07 AM


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