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...Shattered Heart...

Everytime I look up at the night sky,

I ask "why?"

Why did you leave me here?

Along with all of these fears...

Baby where'd you go ?

My tears are running to and fro

I luv u

Do fairy tales come true?

I want to be with you

I've never heard you say,

but i know,

that you loved me too.

This world is so unfair.

All the feelings we had once shared,

has vanished into thin air.

I ask "why?"

Can you hear me cry?

Do you see my tears fall?

I luv you over all.

Once and too many times,

my heart was stolen,and broken.

But this time...

Its different,you're different

No matter how many tears i shed,

luv tells me to look ahead.

Once before and always,

I luv u baby,

...4ever more...


Hi guys!This is a poem I made, please comment on it,anyways,ENJOY!^_^

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That was really cool! I write poems too...but they are all about death and suicide and what not....

2008-01-26 11:43:18


i liked it. maybe i should show you one of my poems.

2008-01-25 10:38:18


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