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The UnMasked Shiganami
Chapter 1: Nightmare
Humor/Horror/Romance
Hisoka: Main Character
Tsuzuki: evil menanse
-Italics are his thoughts
-"{}" these things are at the start of every beginning and end of a song or sound!
"Heh heh so you finally came" A strange large figure apeared before me but it seemed to be human. I could hear my own heart beat loud as I stood up. "What do you want from me?" I said angerly at the figure. "You ask me what do I want from you... *evil laughter* ....... he asks me wut I want from him.......heh heh heh heh..........what I want from you is your soul, Within Janurary 1st to April 25th I shall posses ur soul" *evil laughter*.............. I suddenly wake up in a cold sweat just before my alarm clock goes on. Breathing heavily as I didnt believe the nightmare i just had. *A song comes on the alarm clock it's Inuyasha- I want to change the world* {I want to change the world. Kaze we kakenukete nanimoosorezu ni. ima yuuki to egao no KAKERA daite. Change my mind. jounetsu tayasazu ni takanaru mirai e. te wo nobaseba kagayakeru hazu sa. It's wonderland.......} darn.... That scared the poop outta me!. "Ahh shut up alarm clock" I angrly yelled at my alarm clock as I begin to smash it. The door to my room opens. It was my mother "Hisoka, hunny, it's morning. The sun is shineing, the sky is clear. This is a perfect day to go to school! wut do u think about it? Mr sleepy head!" She said as she opened my curtains of my room with a big smile on her face. "MOOOOOMMMM" I said in a low voice. "yup yup you need too!" "Oh great is it time for another alarm clock?" My mother said as she looked down at my smashed alarm clock which was now laying on the floor. "Mother plz...." I said as she hinted that I wanted her to get out. "ok hun, but plz get ready and come eat breakfast" My mother said as she closed the door and walked happily to the kitchen. I stood up and walked to the closet. What is she soo happy about? I mean dad is never home. He's always out on business trips and never has time to spend with his family, and when he does come home he's drunk half the time!…………… *sigh* hmmmm that dream I had it was sooo weird …………………within that time he'll posses me. Idoit!. I change into my school uniform, snatched my bag from my desk chair and headed downstairs. ..........Death...... I'm too young to die........ he was really ugly! heh..... "Hehe your food is ready! Wakey wakey lamb chomp" My mother said smiling at me while handing me my breakfast. “Hmmmmm, The same breakfast as usual I see……… a cinnamon roll….... Yum” I said happy as I snatched it from the plate. “Now there’s my son being happy on a day like this” my mother said as she giggled afterwards. Now I couldn’t tell my mother that I’ve been having weird dreams where I almost died or I did die. “What’s wrong hun?” My mother asked me as I suddenly snapped back to reality. “Oh it’s nothing, just light headed” I said. “Ok then. Take it easy today then”. ”Yes mother!” I said as I finished my yummy cinnamon roll. Mmmmmmm cinnamon rolls.
[I shall posses ur soul is from Yu Gi Oh the abriged series: the movie]
It's an interesting story. But yes, it does need some editing. Do you use Microsoft Word? Because that one really helps. ^_^ But I do want to know what happens next. XD
Hey guys I need to know if this fan fic is good or not! or it needs some editing!